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I, for one, love these "rebirth" stories where the MC gains some sort of power after either dying or having a major accident happen to them. In most of these stories, the MC either travels to another world/dimension or remains in his current world, but the main similarity is that the MC gains some type of world rule-breaking ability that defies normal convention. The author for this story takes this in a new way and upgrades the MC's eye to have the ability to not only zoom in/out, x-ray, record, but it also the ability to learn and understand abilities and languages. He then uses it to further his career goals as a blue collar worker. The MC is a wholesome, nice guy that has all of the girls he interacts with fall for him in one way or another, but he never goes past the friendship level with those girls (which I find to a certain degree unrelatable and unrealistic). The females that the MC interacts with also seem unrealistic. The girls are either very dependent on the MC to the point that are submissive and can't think for themselves or they are too independent and aggressive that he come off as being bossy and bossing the MC around without him even being able to do anything. For example, his neighbor/childhood friend bosses him around and makes him buy things for her even to the point where she "borrows" his car and makes him pay for the gas and when he asks for it back she tells him she needs it now and he can have her old janky car. What is even more infuriating is that not only does he not even say anything to call her out on it or tell her she shouldn't do it, he just grumbles and agrees to her selfish demands. The author tries to portray the MC as a clever and savvy person when it comes to developing his business, but for some reason he can't even at the least tell this friend of his that what she is doing is overly selfish and that he will not enable her?!?? It would be at least a bit more understanding if he liked her, but throughout the story he has always maintained that he saw her like a sibling. Overall, I believe this story has great potential and I wish to see more chapters in he future (not sure why it stopped), my only complaint is in the character portrayal and I wished it was more realistic.

DaoOfDao
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I have read until chapter 50 to make this review —————— If you have a super eye that could work wonders, what would you do? Some would go use it to gain money, some would go help with the unsolved cases, some would help their friends and families, and some would use it for indecency. This MC does all of this... That should have been a good thing if not for almost every chapter he “accidentally” or “coincidentally” uses it to spy on every women he meets, and apparently all of them are hot. And that should also be a good thing because who wouldn’t want to see good looking people. But after a few chapters, you will just consider it as filler words. ~~~~~ “Ooo this eye gives me x-ray visions!!” “Oh my god! A woman with perky breast, round bottom, and creamy skin! I am so blessed to see this!” A couple chapters after “Oh my god another one! With the same thing but described differently!” The next chapter later “Oh my god! Another one but this time they’re wearing extra clothing. I shouldn’t look. Oh who am I kidding I can’t help it, the eye acted on its own!” Another chapter later”Okay Xia Lei, you’re doing this for business opportunities to know what’s really happening behind the shadows. *Uses the eye’s power* Okay I have infiltrated. Oh my god! The CEO of the business is a hot woman! And she is changing in her room!! *Insert similar description used to describe a hot woman*” ~~~~~~ And that’s basically what I have read. I thought that it would become more interesting as the novel progresses but it doesn’t. So all in all, I was hooked by the summary and disappointed by the actual story. I almost forgot, the MC always gets dominated by all of the woman he meets and follows what he is told. If the woman is not domineering enough, he turns soft and gives in anyways. When the woman is up to no good, he tolerates it because she’s hot. He says he won’t but he does. The only thing I liked was that he’s not greedy with with the money he obtains as he appropriately shares it with his family, friends, and employees. But he is ‘greedy’ with ‘hot women’s’ naked body. I did ‘hot women’ because almost every woman he meets is this. ———— If you are a reader and found the summary interesting and is actually looking for a great story, all I could say is save yourself the time and effort for this one. But I can’t really tell you what to do, so do whatever you want.

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