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Victalis_X
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2019-08-20 01:30

Read 600 plus chapters on "cough" other site. It's getting tough to continue reading this novel, usually only pick up to read when waiting for other stories to update since I've already invested reading many chapters. At this point, my review of the author sums up to: "Frog in a well". Author reflects in his writing, the thoughts of what it seems like an extreme nationalist school boy who bought into all the propaganda fed to him with an extreme narrow view of the rest of the world. Even the translator (original) gets disgusted with the author's "interpretation" of how others view China. It can get vomit inducing... Although it starts off well with a decent concept and story, it later turns into a terrible harem attempt (makes you think the author is a virgin schoolboy). Loads of plot armor added for ridiculous scenarios that likely didn't work out as author originally intended. Lots of repeated scenes that seems childish as the author attempts to portray everyone as either racist or elitist with a subsequent "face slap". It's obviously forced when that aspect doesn't fit with the rest of the said character's personality. Ugh, if it wasn't written by someone with an extreme narrow view of the real world, it would be decent. Author should have done a transmigration to a different world instead of using Earth and modern society as the world. Then maybe the narrow understanding of the real world wouldn't have such a negative effect.

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