Review Detail of KnightShade420 in Immaculate Spirit
Review detail
Bro the title of your story and the synopsis didn't do your story justice. I will be honest I was not very excited about reading a story about a kid sharing head space with a CIA Agent. I didn't know where you were going with this nor the fact that you would combine the two souls together to make a better whole. If I knew your story was anything like Jay Aslan I would have been more excited about reading it. I am ecstatic that I took a chance with your story and kind of angry that you didn't make you synopsis better lol. I could have missed a gem because of that. That all said thank you for a great story and I hope you keep up the good work.
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I was also going to not read this if not for the reviews I feel u should add read the reviews before you start in the synopsis
Newbiel:It is always hard to do a synopsis with enough information to give people the envy to read it and too much information where you know everything that will happen in it. Too much story in my opinion says it all in the synopsis and i hate it, no suprise anymore. Thanks for your comment. :)
Considering the two souls is off in the 2nd chapter you might want to change, if not for this review i would not have bothered. Just imaging the two souls one body puts me off reading. I am also wondering, is there any supernatural elements to this story, if its only the two souls part i would not consider it since its basically just go give him "cool" background. I mean, are we reading about a guy that will age normally and hit it at 90?
Newbiel:It is always hard to do a synopsis with enough information to give people the envy to read it and too much information where you know everything that will happen in it. Too much story in my opinion says it all in the synopsis and i hate it, no suprise anymore. Thanks for your comment. :)
Newbiel:It is always hard to do a synopsis with enough information to give people the envy to read it and too much information where you know everything that will happen in it. Too much story in my opinion says it all in the synopsis and i hate it, no suprise anymore. Thanks for your comment. :)
Newbiel:It is always hard to do a synopsis with enough information to give people the envy to read it and too much information where you know everything that will happen in it. Too much story in my opinion says it all in the synopsis and i hate it, no suprise anymore. Thanks for your comment. :)
Newbiel:It is always hard to do a synopsis with enough information to give people the envy to read it and too much information where you know everything that will happen in it. Too much story in my opinion says it all in the synopsis and i hate it, no suprise anymore. Thanks for your comment. :)
Newbiel:It is always hard to do a synopsis with enough information to give people the envy to read it and too much information where you know everything that will happen in it. Too much story in my opinion says it all in the synopsis and i hate it, no suprise anymore. Thanks for your comment. :)
Bro the story is still ongoing but I don't see a Harem in sight. All the potential is there but I don't think the author is going that route.
CliffkunLolRekt:How’s the harem on this novel and is it still ongoing
Then I’m pissed as I got this of the harem tag area on Webnovel This is the second one that I’ve found on the harem tag search area that is not a harem 😞
KnightShade420:Bro the story is still ongoing but I don't see a Harem in sight. All the potential is there but I don't think the author is going that route.
CliffkunLolRekt:Then I’m pissed as I got this of the harem tag area on Webnovel This is the second one that I’ve found on the harem tag search area that is not a harem 😞
CliffkunLolRekt:Then I’m pissed as I got this of the harem tag area on Webnovel This is the second one that I’ve found on the harem tag search area that is not a harem 😞
nemery11:are really are not finding harem novels? it's basically 80% of this website is harem 😑😑😑.
nemery11:are really are not finding harem novels? it's basically 80% of this website is harem 😑😑😑.
well you could read "Dragon Ball: Saga Of The Strongest Human " if you have not. it's not harem just 2 women
CliffkunLolRekt:I’m pretty shure ive read at least half of this sites novels that have not been droped
honestly more info is better than none, your synopsis is trashy and not inviting whatsoever I'd rather get small spoilers then passing over a good story cause the synopsis is trash
Newbiel:It is always hard to do a synopsis with enough information to give people the envy to read it and too much information where you know everything that will happen in it. Too much story in my opinion says it all in the synopsis and i hate it, no suprise anymore. Thanks for your comment. :)
Was going great and then the ntr hit and made me feel dead inside , the rest felt like trash after that . Was a great relationship. I thought it was gonna become deeper and then its fucks you over with cheating. Honestly feel like crap after that. Need a good and warming romance to read before it damages my emotions more
Ttsfih:Yup this so called great novel has ntr.....