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Immaculate Spirit

Author: Newbiel
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Nathaniel was in a coma for four years or at least that is what everyone thought. In reality he was trapped. Trapped in an endless dark world. That is until the freshly died soul of Marc, a CIA agent, came along and tried to take over his body. By an accident their souls merged and Nathaniel woke up with Marc's memories intact. This is the story of his life and what will become of it. Will he follow the path that was set for himself since his birth or will he forge his own way? Tuned in and find out. (Thanks Dolphingirl for the new synopsis)

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Chapter 1:

Peru, 08/02/2012, 03:04.

Marc "Ghost" Sanchez stared at the curtain of rain that was pouring down endlessly in front of him. Hidden in the shadow of a century old tree tilted on the side, he watched the jungle silently almost peacefully, despite the barking of the dogs getting closer and closer. His hand familiarly squeezed the M9 handgun in his grasp ejecting the magazine, he looked at it briefly before putting it back in its place. His movements were nimble and swift almost like he had repeated it a thousand times before, which he did.

'Great' He thought bitterly. 'Two bullets left plus one more in the chamber. Not enough to make a difference'.

Closing his eyes and concentrating on his hearing for a while, a map of his surroundings took shape in his mind. If the greatest genius on the planet could watch this, they would cry in outrage saying it was impossible or simply an hallucination created by the astronomus amount of stress that he experienced in his life. Which would have been true and a smart hypothesis made by smart people, the only thing that could exclude those explications was that it was real. This was an ability that was born from a life lead fighting in the most dangerous places on this planet and survived where a lot of people did not and where the odds were against him. This ability also helped him survive a lot of things in the last decade when he started developing it and his missions were getting even more dangerous.

Six dogs, thirty five men within an eight hundred feet distance around him, that was the maximum range he could sense, that's what he was going to have to face which with three bullets left in his gun was going to be impossible. Opening his eyes again, he began looking at his hands covered in blood, his blood. Moving a little bit to the side, pain shot through his body, especially from his right shoulder and right hips, where he got hit in his escape.

A bitter smile spread across his face. A rough face that demonstrated a hard-led life. Brown hair, brown eyes and clearly of spanish heritage. 5"9'' with a toned athletic body. He was the kind of people you meet every day in the streets and you don't remember him the second after you have seen him. Which in his line of work was worth more than any currencies.

"Well, it seems that this is going to be the end for me" He said in a cold, unemotionally voice while his right hand revealed a M67 hand grenade that he took from his vest.

Without a hint of hesitation he casually removed the pin and watched the spring-loaded safety lever separate from the grenade. A light seemed to appear in his cold, brown eyes for a second before disappearing. His life started to flash in front of his eyes while he started counting. It was like an entire window had opened inside his mind and things that he had forget or never knew was revealed to him.

"3"

He remembers being born on the first of december 1974 in the city of Dallas, Texas.

He remembers his mother dying while giving birth to him.

He remembers his father dying when he was 6, when he was being shot from a hit and run on the street in front of him.

He remembers being in the care of his uncle, his mother's brother, a military man strict but caring in his own way.

He remembers being trained by him since his 10th birthday because he was too restless.

"2"

He remembers kissing Jessica Northfeld behind the school when he was fourteen. His first kiss.

He remembers winning first place in the state shooting competition that same year followed by another five titles in that category.

He remembers enrolling in the US marine corps when he was eighteen.

He remembers being selected for SEALS training for exceptional aptitude at nineteen.

He remembers gaining his nickname 'Ghost' for his aptitude at adapting and remaining unnoticed regardless of the environnement.

He remembers his first kill at twenty in his first mission in the middle east.

He remembers being wrapped up by the CIA for Black Ops at twenty-five.

"1"

He remembers his first mission for the CIA, killing an african warlord at twenty-six.

He remembers the death of his uncle at twenty-nine from a heart attack.

He remembers his kill count going over one hundred at thirty-two years old.

He remembers his last mission in Peru, killing the lord of a drug cartel who knew too much.

He remembers the CIA abandoning him in enemy territory because he knew too much as well.

He remembers the most important rule that was drilled into him: 'NEVER GET CAUGHT'.

He remembers removing the pin.

"0"

The grenade exploded and with that, he had nothing left to remember.

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welp the review i gave is just. till chap 11 after the boy wakes up and **** he has the ability to learn anything and do the impossible possible and some other **** yet i cant seem to find marc at all it like there is only 1 soul in the body and not 2 even tho marc got into teh body it like the boy killed him or smth the subject of marc isnt even touched upon but it should be if marc himself is in the damn synopsis. anyways what my problem is that this has a pretty **** grammar quality but it readable. it has ****ty character design for the kid acts like an ***** even tho he was inside his own body for 5 years or smth but he doesnt seem affected at all and it not normal he doesnt seem to have any psychological side effects even after he was inside his body still functioning but couldn't talk, if i put the best cookie u ever ate in front of you and then starve you for years how would you think ? anyways basic psychology is a NEIN. World background ?.... well we know he is pampered by gey mothers and has a grandma who loves him even tho she never say him. and he loves them even tho he never saw them, as his moms his grandparents are rich too. yeh imo the only thing till chap 11 is just that he is rich and cant even seem to find the slightest bit of fear that he might have a hard life. if he has not hardships he can never learn truly nor experience ****. story development.... ohh wait that exists here ? i thought the whole story was about the kid being a superhuman who can do anything if he desires nothing interesting here 0-0. updates are very good. all in all if the guy would learn from his mistakes and create a new novel he would best start small and then make it big and he shouldnt be focused on filler till at least he has 30 to 40 chaps cuz u gotta make the main story a priority not how much the mc is so badass and he has the IQ of 1000. Buildungs roman. if u ever heard of that term learn it. anyways hope next time the author will make a better first impressions cuz this was truly a disappointment.

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