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KnightShade420

KnightShade420

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I am a reading addict. I love to read fanfictions especially with Op male main character.

2017-07-08 JoinedCanada
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  • KnightShade420
    KnightShade4205d
    Commented
    "I am Colombian"
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    Reborn In Modern family as Iron Man!
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  • KnightShade420
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    First ever human??? To my knowledge the youngest to graduate Highschool was only 6 years old.

    "I would like to Congratulate Luke Dunphy for the being the first ever Human to surpass 6 grades at once and get promoted from Year 6 to Year 12!"
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    Reborn In Modern family as Iron Man!
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  • KnightShade420
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    Honestly if Akeno is a definite candidate then Having Rias wont cause more issues. Anything Rias faces is going to be faced by Akeno and Akeno would support Rias in anything as they treat each other like family. So devil politics would be a consideration either way unless you abandon Akeno as a choice. So I would agree with Rias as a choice and I would recomend Serafell because if you are gonna f**k a devil then might as well f**k THE Devil. Plus she is awesome and cute.

    Rias Gremory (Potential candidate)
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  • KnightShade420
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    I will be honest here author. Although there were some immature writing that I felt you could have done better at but on the whole the positives outweighed the negatives by a whole margin. Especially self insert fanfics with Modern family is rare to find and most drop it after writeing a couple chapters so I applaud you for writing as many chapters as you did. Btw the only thing I felt bad about the whole story was the system to be honest. The mc was writing content too fast. Even the mc kept on saying it was too much and then he would write another. Anyways I ignored that part and enjoyed the rest immensely. If you decide to come back I recommend writing about Big Bang theory or HIMYM. It’s rare to be self inserted in it aswell.

    Goodbye hope you never meet a trash author like me again.
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    Script Writing System In Modern Family
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  • KnightShade420
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    "Of course. When a god asks for you to listen to their suggestion, you say yes."
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    Testament of Highschool DxDead
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    At this point if I was the god I would take away all of his wishes. If he apologized then I would give him back one wish for annoying someone who didn’t have to help him.

    "As I said, I will not give you anything that makes you strong right from the beginning. So it's a no, I refuse to realize that wish."
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    A casual pervert in mcu
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  • KnightShade420
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    Thank god!

    [A/N: So, I got lazy and decided to skip to the part where they are moving to Forks. His childhood has been going for 4 chapters so I thought it was time they finally move with their dad and start the real story.]
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    Why Twilight?
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  • KnightShade420
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    So he used 4 senzu beans when he only has 12 of them. I would be reluctant to use them unless my life was in danger. Why?

    This paragraph has been deleted.
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  • KnightShade420
    KnightShade4201mth
    Commented

    Oh man this is literally better then the original

    Ch 2 Ch2: Where baby’s com from?
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    Lucas Dunphy: Modern Family x Other Sitcoms.
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  • KnightShade420
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    Honestly not the worst choice but I am a fan of Shiki and his fruit Fuwa Fuwa no Mi. I am just waiting for someone to use islands as amunitions.

    " Ok then I want a fruit that can grant me the wood style of hashirama." Some might consider it dumb to not choose something like rumble rumble fruit or magma magma fruit or glint glint fruit or any other logia fruits or mythical zoan fuits. But where is the fun in that, besides wood style is one of the most versatile and survival oriented ability. You are lost and need shelter, create a wood house; you are hungry, grow a fruit tree etc. And to see the power of trees in One Piece one need not look further than Sabaody archepelago, it is a massive mangrove forest in the middle of the ocean made up of 79 seperate trees known as Yarukiman mangrove that rise from the bottom of the ocean. So yeah not a weak ability at all.
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    In One Piece with Wood Style 18+(Mostly smut)
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  • KnightShade420
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    So mc is going to be 27 years old when Luffy sets of huh!

    " 12 years before Luffy sets off."
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    In One Piece with Wood Style 18+(Mostly smut)
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  • KnightShade420
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    We will pretend it was 5 if it makes the author happy. As long as the author does not give up on this part way through. At least write a 100 ch’s before giving up please.

    George ignored everything of his reincarnation, yet he could remember this character, who was more of a playboy than a charismatic leader. Still, George had proved trustworthy, talented and reliable in the story. However, his body had so much more potential. He could remember that George had awakened grade 5 talent, which was far better than Leylin, the main character from the story. Becoming a magus with this kind of talent was a given, as long as he meditated on a daily basis and didn't waste magical resources.
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    Shadow Knight in the Magus World
    Book&Literature · 232323232322323232
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  • KnightShade420
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    Shouldnt this be called the wizard tournament now that there are more then 3 schools competing.

    Finally, all the schools participating in the Triwizard Tournament had gathered.
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  • KnightShade420
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    That is a weird thing to think off. I mean to the best of his knowledge 3 of them are dead and one is a traitor.

    'Oh, lily, James. Sirius. Peter. Where did you guys go when everyone needed you guys the most.' Remus sadly recalled his past friends and almost shed a tear as he watched Harry's back disappear through the classroom door.
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  • KnightShade420
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    Well with the diadem gone maybe he would last a few years?

    I don't know why the previous professors that tried teaching DADA left their jobs, but I hope to be different.
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  • KnightShade420
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    Would have taken 1 second to fire off a spell to clean up all the mess but no get the only guy who has to do it manually to do it.

    "Great idea Minerva. We'll wait till news comes to us. Severus, Pomona, get the body of the troll away and get Filch to come and clean this up. I'll deal with these spikes." Albus orders as he grabs his wand and waves it at the ground.
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  • KnightShade420
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    So cheesy

    Her previously sad and depressed eyes gain their lustre and shine brightly as she takes my hand and with the most determined look on her face, she says, "Help me become stronger. Help me so that no one can ever pull me down ever again. Help me reach my potential, my friend."
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  • KnightShade420
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    I am confused? Which brother joined the ministry in the first year. If I remember right Bill was working for the goblins as a curse breaker at this point in the timeline and Charlie was working with the dragons habitat. As for Percy the next oldest he should be in the Fifth year if I‘m not wrong. Percy was the only one to join the ministry and that was in fourth year of Harry’s Timeline.

    "That wands so cool. You even got a new one. I only got my big brother's wand after he bought a new one when he joined the ministry.
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  • KnightShade420
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    Replied to OverkillBills

    A lot of fanfic authors haven’t really read the whole story and just know the powers which are pretty simple and easy to use as long as you don’t know the flaws. This is fanfic so to make it easier for himself the author can just imagine that flaw not to be there. The point of the story isn’t the abilities of the library so don’t worry about it. Maybe the ruling is that particular flaw is only in that particular universe and in every other universe it doesn’t matter. Who know? At the end of the day most FF authors use this power to short cut the learning arc. Anyway forget the flaw and enjoy the story.

    "Quite OP for the HP verse, don't you think? Well, I don't think you'll stay there for long, but anyways, let's review your choices. 1, memories, 2, body of harry, 3, the library, 4, Sharingan without curse and upgradeable with training, 5, Byakugan upgradeable with training, 6, life experience of Madara, and finally world travel. Is that right?" he asks.
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  • KnightShade420
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    Honestly Hp world as a novice world to gain strength isn’t bad per se but choosing Harry potters body is not ideal. It comes with a lot of baggage and his looks aren’ top either. I have allways been a fan of Cadiz etrama di raizel as anime looks or Edris Elba or Ryan Reynolds in reality looks.

    "Ok, so if I may choose, I would like to keep my memories, of course, then I would like to inhabit the body of Harry Potter. Have the library of heavens path bound to me. Have Byakugan and Sharingan without the curses and just need training to upgrade them. Then the life experience of Madara Uchiha and finally the ability to travel to any world I can imagine."
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