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KnightShade420

KnightShade420

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I am a reading addict. I love to read fanfictions especially with Op male main character.

2017-07-08 JoinedCanada
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  • KnightShade420
    KnightShade42012d
    Replied to Daoist18OLYQ

    I am not telling you to change your wishes or anything but I am just saying writing a self insert who is technically an oc sounds really complicated and you might get tired of writing this fic pretty easily. If all you want is for the character to integrate into the storyline and not treat everyone as a character then you could have his memories sealed till the start of the first season.

    MC: you see I want to change the world into a better one which is similar to mine. Now onto my wishes, I wish for you to remove all my memory of the modern family as well as this conversation I want to experience it firsthand and I would not want to see them as strangers but rather as family
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    Restart in modern family
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  • KnightShade420
    KnightShade42012d
    Commented

    This sounds like so much work. I would have wished to have technopathy. The power to control all technology and interface with it. With this power he could do everything he wants without having to work hard.

    Mc: I wish to be a prodigy in coding and computers i think it is self-explained 
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    Restart in modern family
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  • KnightShade420
    KnightShade42012d
    Replied to KnightShade420

    Ok the author was just using the word wish but he meant my choice of the world is modern family as Haley’s twin. Not counted as one of his 3 wishes.

    Mc: ok my first wish is to be reincarnated in a modern family as Haley's twin 
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    Restart in modern family
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  • KnightShade420
    KnightShade42012d
    Commented

    I mean the god said world of your choosing and 3 wishes. So I guess his first wish is to be Haley’s twin because the world choice is already given.

    Mc: ok my first wish is to be reincarnated in a modern family as Haley's twin 
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    Restart in modern family
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  • KnightShade420
    KnightShade42021d
    Commented

    Man because of this fanfiction I have come to appreciate so many old songs that I listened to without hearing the lyrics. Thank you author.

    Ch 204 Chapter 204: I lived.
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    Re:life with Karmic Gacha (Modern Family)
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  • KnightShade420
    KnightShade42030d
    Commented

    I am starting to hate this mc. He is a Virgin Mary allways trying to sacrifice himself. Doesnt he understand his life doesn’t belong to himself anymore. His lover gave up half her soul to make him a demigod. Too much drama is headache inducing. I am reading this for the multiverses massages and 20 chapters in I am not even seeing the start.

    Damn, am I sure? potentially sacrifice my life for a busty blonde furry nine-tailed-fox heartbroken and depressed mama? There are so many appealing adjectives. Oh, I have made dumber decisions in my life with worse payouts. Why the fuck no? My instincts are kicking in... busty mothers must be protected and massaged, no matter what.
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    DxD: Multiversal Therapist
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  • KnightShade420
    KnightShade42030d
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    I mean even if you don’t have an insurance if you got run over then the person driving would have had to pay right. Unless it was a hit and run.

    My life was a mess, which culminated with me having an accident; I was run over by a car. I had no insurance; my parents had to pay the fees, and they were very disappointed in me, understandably so. I got a fracture in my thigh bone that, according to the practitioner, 'would never recover.'
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    DxD: Multiversal Therapist
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  • KnightShade420
    KnightShade4201mth
    Commented

    Why not was used too many times in succession. Last chapter last paragraph also had why not so it felt weird and forced.

    "Well, she's lonely and doesn't have a partner, so why not? And to tell you the truth, she's beautiful and hot, and you two will look good together," she said.
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    Primogenitor In Twilight
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  • KnightShade420
    KnightShade4201mth
    Commented

    This is why you need a backstory. Amnesia is so lame and overused. This makes my want to give up on this story.

    "Well, I don't remember anything. I only know that I woke up in my bed without any memories," Raizel says, smiling inside his mind.
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    Primogenitor In Twilight
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  • KnightShade420
    KnightShade4201mth
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    I hate no limits in money because I am a fan of investing arcs. I get it if the author is not interested in making money and investing money arcs but personally no matter how many times I read it I enjoy it. Having a trust fund of a 100 million and a house in forks. Maybe u could use ot for a back story. I mean unless you don’t want to touch on the backstory of the character, the fillers will eventually ask why he moved to Forks and what happened to his parents.

    God: "Dear Alex, or now Raizel, welcome to your new life. I write this letter to tell you that I have only given you three familiar powers because having all twelve familiars in that world is a waste of power. So, I decided to give you three familiars and, in place of the other nine familiars, I have given you immeasurable strength, true martial art mastery, and there is one more gift, but it's a surprise. Now goodbye, and there is a bank card with no limit in money."
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  • KnightShade420
    KnightShade4201mth
    Commented

    Personally I am more of a fan of cadis etrama di raizel. But I would be more then happy as Alucard aswell.

    "Yeah, good for you; now let's decide your powers, but only vampire type," God said. He snapped his fingers again, changing the roulette from world to anime characters like Cadis Etrama Di Raizel, Alucard, Dracula, etc.
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    Primogenitor In Twilight
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  • KnightShade420
    KnightShade4201mth
    Commented

    They don’t have to recognize him to tell their boss when they tried to kidnap the detectives kids they got attacked by a power user. The detective also still doesn’t know his kids are in danger. This was a stupid discussion. The best plan was to tell the detectives about the would be kidnap pets and let them handle it. Maybe help the secretly by making them slip on water. Nothing so blatant that he did.

    One of them spoke with utter discomfort "G-Get away from h-here…let's g-get to the c-car." They were having trouble breathing and even maintaining their balance. I was sure that their eyesight was also clouded due to the pain so they wouldn't be able to recognize me even if I came in front of them a few days later. 
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    In Marvel as Peter Parker's elder brother
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  • KnightShade420
    KnightShade4201mth
    Commented

    This gave me an adams family vibe.

    "I still remember the way you dazzled when we met." 
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    The Knight of Ruin(DxD)
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  • KnightShade420
    KnightShade4201mth
    Commented

    While the sword looks cool I would have preferred a famous sword instead. Something like arondight the sword of Lancelot. In a universe with every famous sword imaginable getting an og sword feels lame.

    (Image here)
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    The Knight of Ruin(DxD)
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  • KnightShade420
    KnightShade4201mth
    Commented

    I am allways a fan of essences. Plus if he got something like the essence of the merchant he could have issei trade his sacred gear for one night with a prostitute. Simple chaos

    "I want the Gravity Magic Demon Lord Wilbert had from the better version of DxD. Testament of a Sister New Devil." 
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    The Knight of Ruin(DxD)
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  • KnightShade420
    KnightShade4201mth
    Commented

    Honestly before dedicating yourself to the goddess of magic maybe it would have a good idea to check with your mother the immortal witch.

    Guide me through the workings of spells, never to depart."
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    Percy Jackson: Son of Hades - Prince of the Underworld
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  • KnightShade420
    KnightShade4201mth
    Replied to Shadow_D_Monarch3

    This is the best looking Hades ever!!!

    Hades(The Father):
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    Percy Jackson: Son of Hades - Prince of the Underworld
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  • KnightShade420
    KnightShade4202mth
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    How the hell did that happen, also this Aunt Petunia is very different from the movie. if you are thinking that she is similar to the actress you are mistaken. Picture older Rias Gremory with glasses, if you can't, then picture Venelana Bael with red hair and Green Eyes, with reading glasses. Impeccable and sinful beauty, it even seems that all the voluptuous body went to the Evans Woman, Not only is all her beauty, she is also a super successful Manipulator of Finance, in addition to Her wealth, For she became a famous book writer, romance.
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    I'm Harry James Potter With Biokinetic Ability
    Movies · Kaioshin
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  • KnightShade420
    KnightShade4203mth
    Replied to eeeergaaaarg

    He got a promotion 😂 😂 😂

    "You've been asleep, Captain." 
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    Marvel: Transmigrated with Travelling Frog?!
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  • KnightShade420
    KnightShade4203mth
    Commented

    Honestly if the mc wanted to f**k Fiona why decide to be her brother.

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    Waking up as a Ghallager (Shameless USA, 2011 SI)
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