I am a reading addict. I love to read fanfictions especially with Op male main character.
First ever human??? To my knowledge the youngest to graduate Highschool was only 6 years old.
Honestly if Akeno is a definite candidate then Having Rias wont cause more issues. Anything Rias faces is going to be faced by Akeno and Akeno would support Rias in anything as they treat each other like family. So devil politics would be a consideration either way unless you abandon Akeno as a choice. So I would agree with Rias as a choice and I would recomend Serafell because if you are gonna f**k a devil then might as well f**k THE Devil. Plus she is awesome and cute.
I will be honest here author. Although there were some immature writing that I felt you could have done better at but on the whole the positives outweighed the negatives by a whole margin. Especially self insert fanfics with Modern family is rare to find and most drop it after writeing a couple chapters so I applaud you for writing as many chapters as you did. Btw the only thing I felt bad about the whole story was the system to be honest. The mc was writing content too fast. Even the mc kept on saying it was too much and then he would write another. Anyways I ignored that part and enjoyed the rest immensely. If you decide to come back I recommend writing about Big Bang theory or HIMYM. It’s rare to be self inserted in it aswell.
At this point if I was the god I would take away all of his wishes. If he apologized then I would give him back one wish for annoying someone who didn’t have to help him.
So he used 4 senzu beans when he only has 12 of them. I would be reluctant to use them unless my life was in danger. Why?
Honestly not the worst choice but I am a fan of Shiki and his fruit Fuwa Fuwa no Mi. I am just waiting for someone to use islands as amunitions.
So mc is going to be 27 years old when Luffy sets of huh!
We will pretend it was 5 if it makes the author happy. As long as the author does not give up on this part way through. At least write a 100 ch’s before giving up please.
Shouldnt this be called the wizard tournament now that there are more then 3 schools competing.
That is a weird thing to think off. I mean to the best of his knowledge 3 of them are dead and one is a traitor.
Well with the diadem gone maybe he would last a few years?
Would have taken 1 second to fire off a spell to clean up all the mess but no get the only guy who has to do it manually to do it.
I am confused? Which brother joined the ministry in the first year. If I remember right Bill was working for the goblins as a curse breaker at this point in the timeline and Charlie was working with the dragons habitat. As for Percy the next oldest he should be in the Fifth year if I‘m not wrong. Percy was the only one to join the ministry and that was in fourth year of Harry’s Timeline.
A lot of fanfic authors haven’t really read the whole story and just know the powers which are pretty simple and easy to use as long as you don’t know the flaws. This is fanfic so to make it easier for himself the author can just imagine that flaw not to be there. The point of the story isn’t the abilities of the library so don’t worry about it. Maybe the ruling is that particular flaw is only in that particular universe and in every other universe it doesn’t matter. Who know? At the end of the day most FF authors use this power to short cut the learning arc. Anyway forget the flaw and enjoy the story.
Honestly Hp world as a novice world to gain strength isn’t bad per se but choosing Harry potters body is not ideal. It comes with a lot of baggage and his looks aren’ top either. I have allways been a fan of Cadiz etrama di raizel as anime looks or Edris Elba or Ryan Reynolds in reality looks.