KnightShade420
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I am not telling you to change your wishes or anything but I am just saying writing a self insert who is technically an oc sounds really complicated and you might get tired of writing this fic pretty easily. If all you want is for the character to integrate into the storyline and not treat everyone as a character then you could have his memories sealed till the start of the first season.
This sounds like so much work. I would have wished to have technopathy. The power to control all technology and interface with it. With this power he could do everything he wants without having to work hard.
Ok the author was just using the word wish but he meant my choice of the world is modern family as Haley’s twin. Not counted as one of his 3 wishes.
I mean the god said world of your choosing and 3 wishes. So I guess his first wish is to be Haley’s twin because the world choice is already given.
I am starting to hate this mc. He is a Virgin Mary allways trying to sacrifice himself. Doesnt he understand his life doesn’t belong to himself anymore. His lover gave up half her soul to make him a demigod. Too much drama is headache inducing. I am reading this for the multiverses massages and 20 chapters in I am not even seeing the start.
I mean even if you don’t have an insurance if you got run over then the person driving would have had to pay right. Unless it was a hit and run.
Why not was used too many times in succession. Last chapter last paragraph also had why not so it felt weird and forced.
This is why you need a backstory. Amnesia is so lame and overused. This makes my want to give up on this story.
I hate no limits in money because I am a fan of investing arcs. I get it if the author is not interested in making money and investing money arcs but personally no matter how many times I read it I enjoy it. Having a trust fund of a 100 million and a house in forks. Maybe u could use ot for a back story. I mean unless you don’t want to touch on the backstory of the character, the fillers will eventually ask why he moved to Forks and what happened to his parents.
Personally I am more of a fan of cadis etrama di raizel. But I would be more then happy as Alucard aswell.
They don’t have to recognize him to tell their boss when they tried to kidnap the detectives kids they got attacked by a power user. The detective also still doesn’t know his kids are in danger. This was a stupid discussion. The best plan was to tell the detectives about the would be kidnap pets and let them handle it. Maybe help the secretly by making them slip on water. Nothing so blatant that he did.
This gave me an adams family vibe.
While the sword looks cool I would have preferred a famous sword instead. Something like arondight the sword of Lancelot. In a universe with every famous sword imaginable getting an og sword feels lame.
I am allways a fan of essences. Plus if he got something like the essence of the merchant he could have issei trade his sacred gear for one night with a prostitute. Simple chaos
Honestly before dedicating yourself to the goddess of magic maybe it would have a good idea to check with your mother the immortal witch.
This is the best looking Hades ever!!!
He got a promotion 😂 😂 😂
Honestly if the mc wanted to f**k Fiona why decide to be her brother.