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AvanAuthor3yr
2021-03-20 18:01

After 2 years and 300+ chapters, I will give my second review of my own work. Hope it will help you to decide to read the novel 1. It was first written for kingdom building competition, so there are a few base buildings in the story. you will see MC travel around the world-famous cities and prepare them for the apocalypse. 2. It's a slow start, I like to build my characters and there actually some chapters that would focus on other characters, but please be patience these characters will give meaning to the story later on. 3. You will not see any OP power of the MC until later volume. (its an interesting one) 4. This is a 2 years old novel, so you can see that the writing will improve in the later chapters. 5. There will be romance - but sorry No Harem The novel is part of a bigger universe with my other novel. so world-building is where I spent a lot of my research and thought in. hope you enjoy it. thanks

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_Felix_Lv13

Ok dang no harem

Jaded_BeautyLv3

Thank god no harem... Now with that all cleared up i can start the series 🥳🥳🥳

_CardinalLv14

Yey! no harem!

r4izelLv14

Ok I will give it a try. Good job on 300s chapters anyway. Keep up the good work!

AlchelukLv12

This sneak peak just encourages to read both novels ! :)

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Weak_HiroLv10

god.... it's okay although I was expecting A harem still this is a masterpiece and I'm also looking forward to the awesome harem yer building for my boi Emery... ಡ ͜ ʖ ಡ

novelfanaticLv5

thanks -love from philippines

LacroLv15

semangat terus. udah jalan 2 tahun dan sudah ada banyak perkembangan .[img=recommend][img=recommend]

Yahya_ZakaryaLv12

i want to is the mc a hero who always forgive people and super kind

CyberZeroLv14

hope you finish it

Apocalypse_2ndLifeLv3

SOO WHAT ABOUT THE SECOND GIRL'S FEELINGS(military granddaughter) ahhh ಥ‿ಥ I put it on hold long ago for more chapters just came back ... that girl was soo good also the girl from other country was there

EnticementLv14

Will this be continued? I plan on reading this rn but it seems to have been dropped. If it is, then I'd rather not read a potentially excellent novel knowing I would immensely regret it once I reach the cliffhanger...

AvanAuthor

yes next month it will start again

Enticement:Will this be continued? I plan on reading this rn but it seems to have been dropped. If it is, then I'd rather not read a potentially excellent novel knowing I would immensely regret it once I reach the cliffhanger...
ChaosAsura0Lv2

Are you sure this isn’t a harem author. I feel like Alex needs to address aria. Tbh he’s not dumb he probably knows and he should tell her there’s no chance.it’s better for her to move on quicker I feel like ur just dragging this i don’t know why Tbh I don’t know how a harem can work when he’s already married with kids who are 12. Tbh I’m disappointed in her that she even still likes him after knowing his family.

Avan:yes next month it will start again
ChaosAsura0Lv2

Is this novel still not a harem? Tbh he acts like he doesn’t have a wife and kids at home sometimes which is disappointing.

Avan:yes next month it will start again
AvanAuthor

what chapters are you in right now..? cause Alex did. and yes this is not harem

ChaosAsura0:Are you sure this isn’t a harem author. I feel like Alex needs to address aria. Tbh he’s not dumb he probably knows and he should tell her there’s no chance.it’s better for her to move on quicker I feel like ur just dragging this i don’t know why Tbh I don’t know how a harem can work when he’s already married with kids who are 12. Tbh I’m disappointed in her that she even still likes him after knowing his family.
ChaosAsura0Lv2

I’m half way. What chapter was it if you can remember?

Avan:what chapters are you in right now..? cause Alex did. and yes this is not harem
AvanAuthor

yep around halfway

ChaosAsura0:I’m half way. What chapter was it if you can remember?
ChaosAsura0Lv2

Do you know the chapter number 🥺🥺. And I hope you pick up the novel again soon

Avan:yep around halfway
ChaosAsura0Lv2

Also you said there will be romance. I feel like you need to give his wife a power up in that cause so she has a reason to stick around when he goes on dangerous adventures. Idk how it’s going to work if she’s always away from him

Avan:what chapters are you in right now..? cause Alex did. and yes this is not harem
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MistbornLv10

This is an excellent mashup of reincarnation/apocalypse genre. The main character is very relatable and you understand his motivations and goals clearly. The story is based in Indonesia, Bali and it’s very refreshing to see something other than American based for a change. So far there is no hyper nationalistic attitudes of thinking their ppl are somehow superior to every other nation with the urge to enslave everyone from other countries or something crazy like that. No misogyny or gratuitous violence / gore / r@pe etc. The main character is not over powered and just has an edge on others because of his experience. He is a family man and I doubt this will go down the route of him building a herem empire where he’s drowning in boooobs (thank heavens for that). I’ve seen people criticizing the novel for being slow, but I don’t agree. The author takes a valid amount of chapters to flesh out the characters and get the ball rolling. It’s called World building. Over all the grammar is the only weak point in this novel. Taking into account that English is not the authors first language, it’s still pretty good and doesn’t take away anything from enjoying this novel. There’s a decent number of chapters already out and seems like author is quite regular at giving us new chapters. The story, character and world background is fleshed out enough and more would be revealed as the story unfolds. The novel deserves more love and recognition than it currently has gotten. I would highly Highly recommended this novel to others.

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