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Avan
AvanAuthor6yr
2019-01-29 23:46

Because i am the author so i will give my own writing 5. The story are inspired by some of the best books i like, sometimes i really wish things would turn differently on those books, hence i try to write one myself. As this is my first novel please feel free to comment or support my writing.

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Williams0306
Williams0306Lv10

you're doing well with the story, keep it up, you know =)

hunter97
hunter97Lv5

Is it harem?

Avan
AvanAuthor

Not sure how to make harem.. probably hard when the MC is married.. 😅

reannear
reannearLv4

Jangan sampai jadi harem.. dont make it be apocalypse harem typical novel

AllSeeingOne
AllSeeingOneLv11

If u can try finding an editor the story is great and if u could fix the grammar problem it would be better

D1vineMonarch
D1vineMonarchLv5

Eu realmente gosto dese novel

cycloraz
cyclorazLv10

No harem pls

Avan:Not sure how to make harem.. probably hard when the MC is married.. 😅
DarkSorceress
DarkSorceressLv12

no polygamy or harem pls

Avan:Not sure how to make harem.. probably hard when the MC is married.. 😅
DarkSorceress
DarkSorceressLv12

no polygamy or harem pls

Avan:Not sure how to make harem.. probably hard when the MC is married.. 😅
DarkSorceress
DarkSorceressLv12

no polygamy or harem pls

Avan:Not sure how to make harem.. probably hard when the MC is married.. 😅
DarkSorceress
DarkSorceressLv12

no polygamy or harem pls

Avan:Not sure how to make harem.. probably hard when the MC is married.. 😅
DarkSorceress
DarkSorceressLv12

no polygamy or harem pls

Avan:Not sure how to make harem.. probably hard when the MC is married.. 😅
DarkSorceress
DarkSorceressLv12

no polygamy or harem pls

Avan:Not sure how to make harem.. probably hard when the MC is married.. 😅
DarkSorceress
DarkSorceressLv12

no polygamy or harem pls

Avan:Not sure how to make harem.. probably hard when the MC is married.. 😅
DarkSorceress
DarkSorceressLv12

no polygamy or harem pls

Avan:Not sure how to make harem.. probably hard when the MC is married.. 😅
The4thWAH
The4thWAHLv14

Will there a harem? Will there a romance? Is it system exist? It is 18+? Answer pls

Avan
AvanAuthor

Romance yes. System yes. Maybe 15+. Harem still within consideration.

The4thWAH:Will there a harem? Will there a romance? Is it system exist? It is 18+? Answer pls
The4thWAH
The4thWAHLv14

Thanks i would start reading it. 👍👍

Avan:Romance yes. System yes. Maybe 15+. Harem still within consideration.
The4thWAH
The4thWAHLv14

Thanks i would start reading it. 👍👍

Avan:Romance yes. System yes. Maybe 15+. Harem still within consideration.
champakes
champakesLv10

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