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2020-08-24 11:52

very awesome work bro. I never feel myself immersed to read as this sort of novels before, may be because of it is too much realistic and technology level equals to our world level plus EMP pulse with loss of current high TeX technology support. wish you good luck and don't drop may slow release rate but not to drop such good novel

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AvanAuthor

thank you. glad you enjoy it

DeadlydeadlyLv3

Is naveed your real name because my brother had the same name

Naveed786Lv5

yes its my real name bro.

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Oke bro

DeadlydeadlyLv3

You didn’t respond to my comment so i didn’t see Your comment but Thats cool.

Naveed786:yes its my real name bro.
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