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SilverDiamond
SilverDiamondLv155yr
2019-02-21 04:16

I'm liking this new twist on the genre. The story is developing well, allowing the reader to be sucked along for the ride. While there are some grammar mistakes, this doesn't detract from the story. Definitely recommend this.

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Thanks. Much appreciated

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