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ChickenGod
ChickenGodLv56yr
2019-02-18 08:31

Your story is really good its only lacking readers, you should we-write this also in other novel sites so more people can discover this treasure.

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Avan
AvanAuthor

Thank you. Any suggestio? Dont really know any other site

ChickenGod
ChickenGodLv5

You can try on Royalroadl

Avan
AvanAuthor

I did. Thanks for the suggest

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