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GGMissFortune
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2019-02-07 13:49

bad writing + weak MC with cheats + nonsensical actions from different characters = template DXD trash-fic bad writing + weak MC with cheats + nonsensical actions from different characters = template DXD trash-fic bad writing + weak MC with cheats + nonsensical actions from different characters = template DXD trash-fic

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RoronoaZolo
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If you don't like it then **** off don't go around ****ting on other's work you fuckin troll

RoronoaZolo
RoronoaZoloLv5

If you don't like it then **** off don't go around ****ting on other's work you fuckin troll

Verpflich
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This is it one star spammer, which can only complain like stransgender feminists hahahaha

Darwin111111
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I haven't read the fanfic yet, but he has made points. He has not put reasons, but still he gave the 'Review' of him. If you just want to give 'I like your fanfic, continue it' as the sole reason and review, then you can't say anything to this stranger.

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