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Israfil
IsrafilLv146yr
2019-02-02 22:50

You should put that english is not your first language! Or just find an editor to fix the wrong typings. My head hurts when i read your story because it feels like watching a video that was chopped and then skipped every 5 seconds.

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Earthshaker34
Earthshaker34Lv6

And how do you know that english isnt his first lamguage? Or are you trying to provide him with an excuse? :D

Israfil
IsrafilLv14

i know it because of the very bad english, he/she didn't even know the difference between it/he/she when using it in the story.

Earthshaker34:And how do you know that english isnt his first lamguage? Or are you trying to provide him with an excuse? :D
ARNE0695
ARNE0695Lv14

If you don't like it don't read it

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