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DerpsonDeDerp
DerpsonDeDerpLv56yr
2019-02-04 20:09

Could be better. The story itself is fine but the grammar hurts. So many mistakes but I can understand that English is not the authors first language but it wouldn’t hurt to use some editor program online to edit the chapters.

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