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DonFrosty
DonFrostyLv143yr
2021-09-25 10:51

I’ve read to the current chapter as of 9/24/2021, and I have to say: it keeps getting better. A lot of people drop at the mention of other isekai’d characters and even vote bad for it having so, to them I say: stop being a special snowflake. Outside of special circumstances a single person being reincarnated for whatever reason to live out their dreams is unrealistic. Sure those make great stories for more unrealistic circumstances but this ain’t that kind of story. Stop voting bad just because the premise doesn’t suit you delicate sensibilities, and try to be more fair to the story itself. The story gets remarkably good as the author gets better and better at writing. Do the other reincarnators mess things up? Yes, but they also typically get obliterated shortly after while pretty much gifting Alex more girls he doesn’t have to visit their worlds for. The author does a amazing job keeping all the girls actually involved as well, ofc he has his favorites, as we all do, but that is to be expected. My only real complaint is having to wait a long time for the next chapter, but that is more then made up for with how long the chapters are each time. TL;DR: Stories good, just gotta stomach some unpleasentness first. Also come with the mindset that just like in the real world not every woman worth loving is going to be a virgin when you meet/meat them. Virgin purists can go suck on eggs.

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Harry_Dresden
4.3
593 Chs

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asssssshhole
asssssshholeLv5

well, it cant help since major of reader still less than 19 years old. obviously still a virgin

3yr
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Yorgan
YorganLv12

like u who is afraid of woman

asssssshhole:well, it cant help since major of reader still less than 19 years old. obviously still a virgin
3yr
DetectiveHarem
DetectiveHaremLv14

hahaha lol nice comment but still i still prefer virgin than none virgin maybe try this one

3yr
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DonFrosty
DonFrostyLv14

Thanks, it’s cool to have a preference, nothing wrong with that. Just hate when I see virgin male edge lords show their autistic tendencies by complaining that a large harem has women that weren’t “pure” before meeting the MC. Personally I couldn’t care less if she was virgin or not. If she good people, then she good people. If she a good lay after, then bonus points, ya know? It’s also just unrealistic to expect a harem of over 100+ women to all have their cherries popped by the MC in a large harem fanfic.

DetectiveHarem:hahaha lol nice comment but still i still prefer virgin than none virgin maybe try this one
3yr
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borbking_chken
borbking_chkenLv4

nice

2yr
Other Reviews
ksreader
ksreaderLv4

Why I stopped reading.... Sorry for the low rating but when you introduced other world travellers than mc, I dropped the novel because of the direction it is headed. Nothing personal.. (I only like op mc with his harem and nobody daring to touch his girls... And hence this is not the novel for me..) Bye

5yr

Amduscias
AmdusciasLv4

Ive read till the point where the beings in the mc realise something/someone is limiting him in his power when i dropped it.Dont know if anyone of you can spoil me what or who it is since i really dont like the whole dark enemy hiding thing troupe.Also the fact there are other potential people that are basically the same as him just turns him into a "normal mc" instead of a guy with a system.Invest at your own risk.

5yr
lIl
lIlLv5

Reveal spoiler

6yr
The_Grindelwald
The_GrindelwaldLv5

Didn't go further than chapter 3 since author seems obsseded with issei and seems to want the mc stick with him, i don't even understand how people can like this character, it's beyond me... Maybe i'm not stupid enough to "appreciate" this character?

6yr
topak
topakLv14

Weak mc ,saiyan bloodline?!! maybe it's fake can turn into Ss, and still getting trash by weakling, just ruined the image of a saiyan getting trashed by and earth god and weak ass devil ,only good when its thinking about his dick, shame on you

5yr
oldthrall
oldthrallLv15

NTR VIBES warning 1, MC has transmigrated to DXD world but even with all his power advantage, ANd knowing that Riser will fondle and kiss Rias in the rating game, doesnt prevent it at all. He lets it happen then uses it as an trigger to let him grow stronger. What fucking bullshit: He might as well repeat that since it granted him so much power?!? Just another fucking excuse from an author to include ntr vibe scenes. 2. MC has system, Saiyan powers, Sacred Gear, all that but still getting beaten left right despite ALSO knowing his opponents powers, personalities, etc. This MC is outright incapable. 3. Novel is poorly written in a “tell” rather than “show” since most things are summarized rather than described. In fact all the while they are in DXD, there is almost no deviation from the original story line except small changes eg harem members and the MC is Alex instead...might as well go read the original work its 10000x better.

3yr
Kenrio
KenrioLv11

I can't help but start hating your novel now that to love ru girls will be raped. this novel go from my most loved of this site to the most hated I ever read in my life I'm even trying to think of ways to forget the existence of this fic

3yr
Man0fsky
Man0fskyLv1

Dropped after chapter 67, due to the large number of lessbian scenes. Like if there was just one kiss there and all then I would not feel strong disgust, but **** there are a lot of such scenes where they eat each other, double penetration, **** disgusting. And about the strength of the Sayan bloodline, he is weak as a cunt, he was defeated by the Fenrir in his super Saiyan, the super Saiyan power amplification x50 ??? And also buffs from work in the system. This fic disgraces the proud name of the Sayan race!!! Writing Quality - 2 stars, because of the lesbian theme Stability of Updates - 3 stars, I don't know, I read it when 350+ chapters were already published Story Development - 2 stars, While I read very little training here, the description of the combat is not very good, mostly *** scenes and just the interaction of mc with the characters Character Design - 1 star, Weak, catches girls like Pokemon, stupid, does not use his potential, since there are many strong characters around him and he can ask for sparring with them and get zenkai boost, combat experience, and build relationships with them World Background - 1 star, some god, a test, other transmigators, and observer angels, why is this, what is the point? idk

4yr
IncarnationOfFate
IncarnationOfFateLv6

After chapter 100 the mc became someone that only thinks with his dick 140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140

5yr
Klipsi
KlipsiLv11

Honestly, I do not see how this chapter get such a high rating... chapter 2 level increase, chapter 3 level increase, etc... he just sit there and **** and his level still increase... wow

6yr
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