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The_Grindelwald
The_GrindelwaldLv55yr
2019-02-15 13:29

Didn't go further than chapter 3 since author seems obsseded with issei and seems to want the mc stick with him, i don't even understand how people can like this character, it's beyond me... Maybe i'm not stupid enough to "appreciate" this character?

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Harry_Dresden
Harry_DresdenAuthor

Dude, look at the list of chapters, not even ten chapters in there's one that says breaking the perverted trio, I had issei gangr aped from hell because people didn't want him.

Harry_Dresden
Harry_DresdenAuthor

And it's not that I'm "obsessed" with issei, fanfics where the writer boots the original mc and simply takes their place kinda piss me off, regardless of how the mc was so I was trying to avoid that, and since I kicked issei anyways I was going to go rewrite the first few chapters

Marvelboy8
Marvelboy8Lv5

The author isn't obsessed with issei. The next time he really where Alex talks to issei is in chapter 6 where he is written off

Nydre
NydreLv13

Author you should get a picture for the story, it'd attract more attention.

Harry_Dresden:And it's not that I'm "obsessed" with issei, fanfics where the writer boots the original mc and simply takes their place kinda piss me off, regardless of how the mc was so I was trying to avoid that, and since I kicked issei anyways I was going to go rewrite the first few chapters
Harry_Dresden
Harry_DresdenAuthor

I've heard that, but I only have the app to work off of, and it won't let me unless I do it from the site itself.

Nydre:Author you should get a picture for the story, it'd attract more attention.
InterPlanarGod
InterPlanarGodLv13

Issei was ignored aftter that chapter.

Gabbu_Xul
Gabbu_XulLv14

Author, have you thought about getting this review removed, as it’s completely inaccurate?

Rawr_Kitten
Rawr_KittenLv5

Its a novel about treating women as collectable sex toys... you expect a plot line? We all know harem novels are 99% about the mc focused on who next to treat as a toy not about plot or thought process you put way to much faith in a author who clearly is writeing while he has **** hub open on the side

Faiterkings
FaiterkingsLv2

Igual yo no entiendo eso he leído muchos fanfic que tienen potencial pero no entiendo la cosa de querer que siempre sean grandes amigos de issei entendería si issei en el Canon fue un personaje de puta madre que fuera un protagonista bueno pero no nada de eso es solo un protagonista basura que solo le interesa los pechos y aún así es un puta basura virgen con suerte de tener un gran poder regalado y el poder de la trama muchos fanfic los dejo al nomás notar eso pero por lo que veo abajo dice que cambio eso así que le daré una oportunidad a este fanfic

Thesoultaker88
Thesoultaker88Lv5

i would like to ask some qustions before i start reading and that is one will mc take his harem together to other worlds and two will there be drama and last will there be lemos/r18 chapters

Harry_Dresden:Dude, look at the list of chapters, not even ten chapters in there's one that says breaking the perverted trio, I had issei gangr aped from hell because people didn't want him.
Omniverse_Creator
Omniverse_CreatorLv11

I know this is a year old comment, but your fucking comment is fucking angering me. You do realize how hard it is to write a harem novel with A LOT of characters, right? As an original harem novel author who works his ass off to write a good novel, I am insulted by how you treat harem novels, even calling the women that the authors WORKED HARD to MAKE as collectable *** toys. I had to fucking research and re-edit so that I can make a wonderful character for my mc to have, and this is what you say to all harem authors? And what do you mean writing with ****hub open? Are you a fucking idiot or something? You do realize how hard and mentally taxing it is to FUCKING WRITE a FUCKING R-18 chapter and thinking of the plot to where the story proceeds at the same time, right? Cuz if you don't, you are a fucking idiot that needs to shut his fucking mouth. Harem novels focused on making a harem and not plot? Are you fucking stupid or something? Sure, there might be some novels that do this kind of shit, but some others do it for a fucking reason (Ex. Lust Knight). Excuse me if you say harem novels have no plotline. Go fucking read Arifureta and say that there is no plotline. A LOT of harem novels have a better plotline than the plotline of your fucking brain (Which doesn't exist). Harem authors work harder than you can, AND you just read. I will respect you if you don't like harem novels, but NEVER insult it. Have you ever seen harem fans hating on a novel because it isn't harem? NO, because they respect novels and like the story even if there is no harem. They can accept romance between single characters, unlike the fucking "NO HAREM" group, which is fucking stupid.

Rawr_Kitten:Its a novel about treating women as collectable sex toys... you expect a plot line? We all know harem novels are 99% about the mc focused on who next to treat as a toy not about plot or thought process you put way to much faith in a author who clearly is writeing while he has **** hub open on the side
Harry_Dresden
Harry_DresdenAuthor

Yes the harem will follow, and yes there'll be lemons, and it depends on what you mean by drama

Thesoultaker88:i would like to ask some qustions before i start reading and that is one will mc take his harem together to other worlds and two will there be drama and last will there be lemos/r18 chapters
AntiWorldSystem
AntiWorldSystemLv13

Man ,i hate when you make great red limited MC power Just for the sake of plot.... Its better you make MC OP. .. .. Like a neighbor novel...... Their novel have the same concept with you.... With multiple transmigrator with system.... But MC progress is the faster and stronger than all other contestant...... He is have a harem too..... So MC is basically like an over powered main character.... Because how fast he to became stronger than any other participant..... Its your mistakes to make an side character limited MC power....

AntiWorldSystem
AntiWorldSystemLv13

Its better for you in the start to make MC have control of his power and train to be stronger first then start a mission, so this novel could be more populer than any novel out there.... Because 50% or more reader in this world, always search for more fanfiction novel that have an OP MC, harem, cross over to the anime world, and Many chapter....

AntiWorldSystem
AntiWorldSystemLv13

This is just my suggestion ..... Whether you accept it or not it's all up to you .... Why do I say this, because in my experience 50% or more of readers who like to read fan fiction novels prefer to read novels that have an OP MC , harem, cross-dimensional travel, and has many chapters, and especially no armor plot, meaning that only the MC dominates his destiny and deeds .... Not protected and controlled by the name world Will and the plot armor ....

AntiWorldSystem
AntiWorldSystemLv13

And of course the one that not have an beta MC, naive MC ,and etc

Nadare17
Nadare17Lv4

I know I am late to give a reply to this comment but this is REAL TALK to those harem tag haters

Omniverse_Creator:I know this is a year old comment, but your fucking comment is fucking angering me. You do realize how hard it is to write a harem novel with A LOT of characters, right? As an original harem novel author who works his ass off to write a good novel, I am insulted by how you treat harem novels, even calling the women that the authors WORKED HARD to MAKE as collectable *** toys. I had to fucking research and re-edit so that I can make a wonderful character for my mc to have, and this is what you say to all harem authors? And what do you mean writing with ****hub open? Are you a fucking idiot or something? You do realize how hard and mentally taxing it is to FUCKING WRITE a FUCKING R-18 chapter and thinking of the plot to where the story proceeds at the same time, right? Cuz if you don't, you are a fucking idiot that needs to shut his fucking mouth. Harem novels focused on making a harem and not plot? Are you fucking stupid or something? Sure, there might be some novels that do this kind of shit, but some others do it for a fucking reason (Ex. Lust Knight). Excuse me if you say harem novels have no plotline. Go fucking read Arifureta and say that there is no plotline. A LOT of harem novels have a better plotline than the plotline of your fucking brain (Which doesn't exist). Harem authors work harder than you can, AND you just read. I will respect you if you don't like harem novels, but NEVER insult it. Have you ever seen harem fans hating on a novel because it isn't harem? NO, because they respect novels and like the story even if there is no harem. They can accept romance between single characters, unlike the fucking "NO HAREM" group, which is fucking stupid.
mugiwaya
mugiwayaLv1

Which novel are you referring to?

AntiWorldSystem:Man ,i hate when you make great red limited MC power Just for the sake of plot.... Its better you make MC OP. .. .. Like a neighbor novel...... Their novel have the same concept with you.... With multiple transmigrator with system.... But MC progress is the faster and stronger than all other contestant...... He is have a harem too..... So MC is basically like an over powered main character.... Because how fast he to became stronger than any other participant..... Its your mistakes to make an side character limited MC power....
AllHailThe69th
AllHailThe69thLv3

what is this neighbour novel?

AntiWorldSystem:Man ,i hate when you make great red limited MC power Just for the sake of plot.... Its better you make MC OP. .. .. Like a neighbor novel...... Their novel have the same concept with you.... With multiple transmigrator with system.... But MC progress is the faster and stronger than all other contestant...... He is have a harem too..... So MC is basically like an over powered main character.... Because how fast he to became stronger than any other participant..... Its your mistakes to make an side character limited MC power....
EyeOfSilver
EyeOfSilverLv13

sigh don't write reviews if you didn't read it ;/

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