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Man0fsky
Man0fskyLv14yr
2021-02-01 09:18

Dropped after chapter 67, due to the large number of lessbian scenes. Like if there was just one kiss there and all then I would not feel strong disgust, but **** there are a lot of such scenes where they eat each other, double penetration, **** disgusting. And about the strength of the Sayan bloodline, he is weak as a cunt, he was defeated by the Fenrir in his super Saiyan, the super Saiyan power amplification x50 ??? And also buffs from work in the system. This fic disgraces the proud name of the Sayan race!!! Writing Quality - 2 stars, because of the lesbian theme Stability of Updates - 3 stars, I don't know, I read it when 350+ chapters were already published Story Development - 2 stars, While I read very little training here, the description of the combat is not very good, mostly *** scenes and just the interaction of mc with the characters Character Design - 1 star, Weak, catches girls like Pokemon, stupid, does not use his potential, since there are many strong characters around him and he can ask for sparring with them and get zenkai boost, combat experience, and build relationships with them World Background - 1 star, some god, a test, other transmigators, and observer angels, why is this, what is the point? idk

God succession system

Harry_Dresden
4.3
597 Chs

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Man0fsky
Man0fskyLv1

Oh and ntr

4yr
13
OneeSans_Shota
OneeSans_ShotaLv5

Thanks... U saved me

4yr
4
el_tato
el_tatoLv1

Can you tell me if there is NTR in the story? ... please

4yr
1
Ototsu_Yume
Ototsu_YumeLv11

There is, another guy goes around with NTR reality altering abilities and invades several worlds before mc deals with him including to love ru. (The only ntr against the mc's girls is when riser gropes and kisses Rias against her will but mc being beta af at that time didn't stop it in order to power up which is pretty disgusting itself) however the girls that were ntr'd by the reality altering guy eventually end up with the mc so it's up to you to judge weather it still counts.

el_tato: Can you tell me if there is NTR in the story? ... please
3yr
6
H75_N
H75_NLv4

its disgusting if you don't have power to protect them why even have a harem?

Ototsu_Yume:There is, another guy goes around with NTR reality altering abilities and invades several worlds before mc deals with him including to love ru. (The only ntr against the mc's girls is when riser gropes and kisses Rias against her will but mc being beta af at that time didn't stop it in order to power up which is pretty disgusting itself) however the girls that were ntr'd by the reality altering guy eventually end up with the mc so it's up to you to judge weather it still counts.
1yr
1
Qemetiel
QemetielLv4

if they'd been ntr'd why would anyone even want them?

Ototsu_Yume:There is, another guy goes around with NTR reality altering abilities and invades several worlds before mc deals with him including to love ru. (The only ntr against the mc's girls is when riser gropes and kisses Rias against her will but mc being beta af at that time didn't stop it in order to power up which is pretty disgusting itself) however the girls that were ntr'd by the reality altering guy eventually end up with the mc so it's up to you to judge weather it still counts.
1yr
Ototsu_Yume
Ototsu_YumeLv11

The mc in this novel doesn't turn down anything remotely female regardless of history or personality.

Qemetiel:if they'd been ntr'd why would anyone even want them?
1yr
Other Reviews
ksreader
ksreaderLv4

Why I stopped reading.... Sorry for the low rating but when you introduced other world travellers than mc, I dropped the novel because of the direction it is headed. Nothing personal.. (I only like op mc with his harem and nobody daring to touch his girls... And hence this is not the novel for me..) Bye

6yr

Amduscias
AmdusciasLv4

Ive read till the point where the beings in the mc realise something/someone is limiting him in his power when i dropped it.Dont know if anyone of you can spoil me what or who it is since i really dont like the whole dark enemy hiding thing troupe.Also the fact there are other potential people that are basically the same as him just turns him into a "normal mc" instead of a guy with a system.Invest at your own risk.

5yr
lIl
lIlLv5

Reveal spoiler

6yr
The_Grindelwald
The_GrindelwaldLv5

Didn't go further than chapter 3 since author seems obsseded with issei and seems to want the mc stick with him, i don't even understand how people can like this character, it's beyond me... Maybe i'm not stupid enough to "appreciate" this character?

6yr
topak
topakLv14

Weak mc ,saiyan bloodline?!! maybe it's fake can turn into Ss, and still getting trash by weakling, just ruined the image of a saiyan getting trashed by and earth god and weak ass devil ,only good when its thinking about his dick, shame on you

5yr
oldthrall
oldthrallLv15

NTR VIBES warning 1, MC has transmigrated to DXD world but even with all his power advantage, ANd knowing that Riser will fondle and kiss Rias in the rating game, doesnt prevent it at all. He lets it happen then uses it as an trigger to let him grow stronger. What fucking bullshit: He might as well repeat that since it granted him so much power?!? Just another fucking excuse from an author to include ntr vibe scenes. 2. MC has system, Saiyan powers, Sacred Gear, all that but still getting beaten left right despite ALSO knowing his opponents powers, personalities, etc. This MC is outright incapable. 3. Novel is poorly written in a “tell” rather than “show” since most things are summarized rather than described. In fact all the while they are in DXD, there is almost no deviation from the original story line except small changes eg harem members and the MC is Alex instead...might as well go read the original work its 10000x better.

4yr
Kenrio
KenrioLv11

I can't help but start hating your novel now that to love ru girls will be raped. this novel go from my most loved of this site to the most hated I ever read in my life I'm even trying to think of ways to forget the existence of this fic

4yr
IncarnationOfFate
IncarnationOfFateLv6

After chapter 100 the mc became someone that only thinks with his dick 140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140

5yr
Klipsi
KlipsiLv11

Honestly, I do not see how this chapter get such a high rating... chapter 2 level increase, chapter 3 level increase, etc... he just sit there and **** and his level still increase... wow

6yr
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