Overly reliant on the source material to the point where the presence of the MC amounts to absolutely nothing, so much so that calling this fan fiction is a stretch so exaggerated it pulls your groin thrice over. Author took about 60 chapters to recount the 3rd book (at a bit under 100k words), while the original is a grand total of 107k. This alone isn't an indicator of poor quality but the fact that the only change we get is someone getting torn apart at the end, while the rest remains an almost shot for shot remake. The MCs sole purpose at this point in time seems to be snarky comments and the occasional one liners, only making any form of contribution once it's relevance to the plot has been whittled down to a finite point. Some HP fan fiction goes crazy with ideas like cultivation, dragon animagi and ancient families, but at least all of these stories have tried to inovate upon the source material, while this author is clearly far too comfortable wrapped up in the warm embrace of a pre gay Dumbledore JK Rowling. Vastly over rated and provides almost nothing of substance. Just read the originals again, after all they'll tell the same story.
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I agree :)
I have read all those reviews that sht on your story but i never seen u lose it RESPECT
CrossArk:I agree :)
Lol, I like to think of myself as modest. ;P
neymar:I have read all those reviews that sht on your story but i never seen u lose it RESPECT
Why it say no gay but it is gay and also NTR? I am asking serious
CrossArk:Lol, I like to think of myself as modest. ;P
And the man is still waiting 2 years later...
Sandwhich:Why it say no gay but it is gay and also NTR? I am asking serious
