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XiaoYuFu
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2019-01-12 12:03

This is a clear example of how a cliche baseplot can turn into something that is totally unexpected, and since I have like to make more words to make a review of something that can be said in something short, I am rambling here. Sometimes, almost always, it is better to be concise instead of just saying thing over and over again. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

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Thankyou Author... AND PLEASE COMPENSATE FOR 1 MONTH ABSENCE.. WITH MORE UPDATES ..๐Ÿค๐Ÿ™„๐Ÿ™„

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shezz1:Thankyou Author... AND PLEASE COMPENSATE FOR 1 MONTH ABSENCE.. WITH MORE UPDATES ..๐Ÿค๐Ÿ™„๐Ÿ™„
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Before you attack me for the 1 star, I can genuinely say I did try to read this story. I really did. Not only was it not my cup of tea, but in fact, Iโ€™m sure anyone with eyes and a logical mindset with agree. This is definitely an atrocity to grammar. To the English language. To English literature. For goodness sake, what are โ€œwarewolvesโ€? In fact, hereโ€™s even more (copied and pasted): โ€œDid i really speak about my mate so much.. oh gosh i am acting to girl when i was supposed to be manly .. but still i can't thinking about her makes my mind go giddy ... taking her to my bed and doing things with her to make her cry my name .. " Your such a pervert " my wolf said " don't say you are not " " only to my mate " he replied with a growl " me too wolfy" What? Seriously? Can I throw a dictionary in your direction, as well as basic punctuation thatโ€™s taught to an elementary-aged student? Author claims to be 17, but even my seven year old sister can write better and actually knows what to write lmao Even garbage doesnโ€™t describe this story. No plot, no grammar, no originality. Just call it a BAD copy and paste of other clichรฉ stories on wattpad, okay? Please, for the love of God, do not bring such nonsensical shยกt to WN. Stick to your wattpad, okay? There, you can find your alphas, bad boys, stepbrothers, and billionaires. For anyone of you who thinks Iโ€™m hating, Iโ€™m not. Iโ€™m genuinely disgusted. To hate would be to hate an emotion... something that I am not even willing to waste on this awful โ€œbookโ€.

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