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hiddenaccountLv36yr
2019-01-09 17:16

I am not suppose to put a review but still did .. as i am a hidden account Good story Good beginning nice humour .. not the best Waiting for romance Chapter titles are bang on good I will check out the other book .. Few review is true about yhe the punctuation but who the hell cares about it anyway

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DIMPLEQUEEN101
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Love your comment " Hidden account " interesting name.. Is this a second account of author ???

La_Light
La_LightLv11

Haha.. punctuation n who the hell cares! True, true, so true! ๐Ÿ˜‚

hiddenaccount
hiddenaccountLv3

Story matters !!

La_Light:Haha.. punctuation n who the hell cares! True, true, so true! ๐Ÿ˜‚
La_Light
La_LightLv11

Yeah.

hiddenaccount:Story matters !!
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Anonymoussssssssss
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Before you attack me for the 1 star, I can genuinely say I did try to read this story. I really did. Not only was it not my cup of tea, but in fact, Iโ€™m sure anyone with eyes and a logical mindset with agree. This is definitely an atrocity to grammar. To the English language. To English literature. For goodness sake, what are โ€œwarewolvesโ€? In fact, hereโ€™s even more (copied and pasted): โ€œDid i really speak about my mate so much.. oh gosh i am acting to girl when i was supposed to be manly .. but still i can't thinking about her makes my mind go giddy ... taking her to my bed and doing things with her to make her cry my name .. " Your such a pervert " my wolf said " don't say you are not " " only to my mate " he replied with a growl " me too wolfy" What? Seriously? Can I throw a dictionary in your direction, as well as basic punctuation thatโ€™s taught to an elementary-aged student? Author claims to be 17, but even my seven year old sister can write better and actually knows what to write lmao Even garbage doesnโ€™t describe this story. No plot, no grammar, no originality. Just call it a BAD copy and paste of other clichรฉ stories on wattpad, okay? Please, for the love of God, do not bring such nonsensical shยกt to WN. Stick to your wattpad, okay? There, you can find your alphas, bad boys, stepbrothers, and billionaires. For anyone of you who thinks Iโ€™m hating, Iโ€™m not. Iโ€™m genuinely disgusted. To hate would be to hate an emotion... something that I am not even willing to waste on this awful โ€œbookโ€.

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