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2019-05-24 00:16

Really really loved it.. A bit of grammatical errors are there. Except that loved it. Funny and cute. Especially when author has crush on second Male lead. And their story is so fucking adorable. I loved their story more Author did a good job using cringe lines to seduce the second ML .. especially the proposal scene is couple goals.. but who proposes in a washroom?? Still love this crazy author.

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Before you attack me for the 1 star, I can genuinely say I did try to read this story. I really did. Not only was it not my cup of tea, but in fact, I’m sure anyone with eyes and a logical mindset with agree. This is definitely an atrocity to grammar. To the English language. To English literature. For goodness sake, what are “warewolves”? In fact, here’s even more (copied and pasted): “Did i really speak about my mate so much.. oh gosh i am acting to girl when i was supposed to be manly .. but still i can't thinking about her makes my mind go giddy ... taking her to my bed and doing things with her to make her cry my name .. " Your such a pervert " my wolf said " don't say you are not " " only to my mate " he replied with a growl " me too wolfy" What? Seriously? Can I throw a dictionary in your direction, as well as basic punctuation that’s taught to an elementary-aged student? Author claims to be 17, but even my seven year old sister can write better and actually knows what to write lmao Even garbage doesn’t describe this story. No plot, no grammar, no originality. Just call it a BAD copy and paste of other cliché stories on wattpad, okay? Please, for the love of God, do not bring such nonsensical sh¡t to WN. Stick to your wattpad, okay? There, you can find your alphas, bad boys, stepbrothers, and billionaires. For anyone of you who thinks I’m hating, I’m not. I’m genuinely disgusted. To hate would be to hate an emotion... something that I am not even willing to waste on this awful “book”.

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