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AnonymoussssssssssLv26yr
2019-02-01 03:50

Before you attack me for the 1 star, I can genuinely say I did try to read this story. I really did. Not only was it not my cup of tea, but in fact, I’m sure anyone with eyes and a logical mindset with agree. This is definitely an atrocity to grammar. To the English language. To English literature. For goodness sake, what are “warewolves”? In fact, here’s even more (copied and pasted): “Did i really speak about my mate so much.. oh gosh i am acting to girl when i was supposed to be manly .. but still i can't thinking about her makes my mind go giddy ... taking her to my bed and doing things with her to make her cry my name .. " Your such a pervert " my wolf said " don't say you are not " " only to my mate " he replied with a growl " me too wolfy" What? Seriously? Can I throw a dictionary in your direction, as well as basic punctuation that’s taught to an elementary-aged student? Author claims to be 17, but even my seven year old sister can write better and actually knows what to write lmao Even garbage doesn’t describe this story. No plot, no grammar, no originality. Just call it a BAD copy and paste of other cliché stories on wattpad, okay? Please, for the love of God, do not bring such nonsensical sh¡t to WN. Stick to your wattpad, okay? There, you can find your alphas, bad boys, stepbrothers, and billionaires. For anyone of you who thinks I’m hating, I’m not. I’m genuinely disgusted. To hate would be to hate an emotion... something that I am not even willing to waste on this awful “book”.

my mate is a superstar

shezz1
4.6
64 Chs

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shezz1
shezz1Author

thank you for your review of my disgusting " book " ... I am extremely honored to have you review my garbage book I will definitely remember to come and take classes from your sister... *bye bye* ~~runs away before you hit me with a dictionary~~

6yr
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shizuka112
shizuka112Lv4

looks like we have an OCD fellow among us 😂 and I do know these kinds of stories are really common in wattpad... But I still love it as it is not the same inside and I don't Give a fu*k about Punctuation, when the story is good and readable

6yr
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greenlove11
greenlove11Lv4

NO cure for OCD !

6yr
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PlantIsSafe
PlantIsSafeLv1

I can't even- D*mn. The grammar is so awful it is impossible to read the story without cringing every second. "Warewolves" wtf is warewolves. What even. Have you ever heard of capitalization? I don't think so. The fact that it's a typical wattpad werewolf type of story doesn't make things better. Webnovel is legit becoming another Wattpad. Disappointed af.

6yr

DIMPLEQUEEN101
DIMPLEQUEEN101Lv2

I absolutely love this novel so so so much It is so nice to read a ****** minded novel where falling in love happens in an instant .. Better than frustrating novels I just noticed author started the novel two days ago and she already got many views and likes hope she does well in the future also And i also loved the side stories as other review said ALL THE BEST AUTHOR 🙃

6yr
kate1221
kate1221Lv2

This a novel which would never make you frustrated nor make you bored .. it's just right It has just begun so let's see how it goes.. I really sugest you read this.. Its really nice Author has added many funny scenes to .. which are like behind the scene .those are damn funny 😂😂

6yr
greenlove11
greenlove11Lv4

I Love the story and the author so much It is really nice I don't know why people gave 1 star here.. but i honestly don't give a fu*k about the punctuation when the story is good .. I am happy when i read it and that's good enough for me ..

6yr
greesh
greeshLv5

Reveal spoiler

5yr
La_Light
La_LightLv11

Nice story! The style of writing is way different from other novels. It's good to read and can have a try. The way author and the male lead interacts in between is so nice and keeps the story lively. Looking for more developments in the story.

6yr
hiddenaccount
hiddenaccountLv3

I am not suppose to put a review but still did .. as i am a hidden account Good story Good beginning nice humour .. not the best Waiting for romance Chapter titles are bang on good I will check out the other book .. Few review is true about yhe the punctuation but who the hell cares about it anyway

6yr
Lady_Ale
Lady_AleLv11

So yeahh!!! After reading ur novel(confession) I decided to read this tooo......and I really loved the way Ash treats echo💯🔥and I would love to read ur other novels too but then I dunno if there are other novels of urs other than these two 🤔 I hope you keep writing such cute cute stories 💞 and yeah ,I'm an Indian💃🙈 you see I got so excited when I you told that you were Indian 😂but then I dunno why !!! Lastly , ur novels made my day💘

6yr
mahekmehta104
mahekmehta104Lv11

Love the story and i just started reading very mind blowing just love it👍👌💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💖💕💖💕💕💕💕💖💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💖💕💖💕

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