Item: I Cant Miss !!!
Rating: 5
Author: kobeblackmamba

kobeblackmambaLv73yr

2021-08-23 05:33

I love this story all you need is to improve grammar, update speed, and story development along with other things. Tbh, I'm not that good at writing either and I'm not saying your not good. You are actually the first person's novel I really enjoy. Keep up the good work and train harder....

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