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2020-03-26 08:51

Honestly, the writing is bad at best. The grammar is lacking, and reads like a bad mtl. The characters are as 1-dimensional as they get - even cultivation novels have better written characters. The world basically accepts that the Mc has absurd skills and bends to his whim, making the Mc a definitional Mary Sue, and a badly written one. Would not recommend.

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