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SlyTheFox
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2020-02-13 16:18

I like the idea behind the story and the fact that Mc harem might include real life characters like riri, and Nicki, cardi... But the writing style is, I'll try to be diplomatic here, not so good. I don't enjoy the book much because of it. At least it's better than Be Happy With Sports'

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MrE
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Ya I agree since this is my first novel and I winged it lol

SlyTheFox
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Anyway, keep up the good work

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