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LightningDomain
LightningDomainLv133yr
2021-07-12 12:47

I really do like the story, but the writing has made this novel very questionable. The author decides to bring religion in to this (Not made up but actual religion from irl) and he states he wants to being Judaism into it for how ot can help the story and how he has no bias, bit this turns out to be a complete lie. In a few of the chapters he mentions how Jews are struggling to live in Jerusalem and how Palestine and all the Muslim countries are out to kill them but this is simply false. First off, to anyone who has read the news about this area, would easily be able to find out that Isarel has control over Palestinian and are attacking civilians and forcing them to move with violence. Palestinians are under threat by Israeli forces and not the other way around. Also many Muslim countries have good relations with Isarel and have struck deals benefiting Israel. There shouldn't be any reason to claim all muslim countries want to kill Jews because that's just made up by the author. It's not difficult to find this info so unless the author decided to write without any knowledge of the area it only seems possible he's doing this intentionally to put Muslims in a negative light. I have nothing against talking about religion but racism and lying about a group of people to make them look bad is not acceptable.

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RAINDR0P
RAINDR0PLv4

Man its just fiction why don’t you just focus on the story the religion is just being used as an story telling tool The author in one of the chapter went to explain that

LightningDomain
LightningDomainLv13

Yeah I read that, but the way he's writing seems to be contradicting that. life lesson for you kid, not everyone means what they say.

RAINDR0P:Man its just fiction why don’t you just focus on the story the religion is just being used as an story telling tool The author in one of the chapter went to explain that
The_Good_Devil
The_Good_DevilLv5

you are not wrong. but as person who grew up in Syria which is beside Israel. we were literally brain washed to have an collective enemy so we will be more nationalism. and I have to admit that was effective plans from the government. my parents and grandparents generation all of them were taught that Israel is an enemy who took part of Syria (an area known as Golan) and we need to get back. so we really don't hate Jewish people. it just a huge political game going around there. and you are right. the author is bias in the story (to the point providing an unreasonable points to why Christianity). the only downside i must say, but it worth reading nonetheless.

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