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VistarionLv115yr
2019-08-14 09:07

The heroes will behave unnaturally. Within a few days, they change from young teens to war veterans with highly unnatural moral principles. The whole plot is strongly forced by the author, for some reason a single man is able to intimidate people to follow him and after a few chapters they are loyal as if they served together all their lives. I no longer mention the complete nonsense of the world technology and justifying the success of the plot armore hero.

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novel_fanatic
novel_fanaticLv13

Same here...also its understandable why the kid changed so quickly since he has his past life memories and thats all he knows and how he knows to act and due to being in constant life and death situatuons he views situations and everything differently thats actually perfectly normal.

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novel_fanatic
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Also its due to how serious the situation is an they see that they need to change to be able to survive anyone would do all they can to make sure that they as well as the people closest ti them survive...unless they are narrow minded and think of themselves which is normal also so i wont really jusge those type of people....well only judge them a little bit..a tiny bit.

novel_fanatic:Same here...also its understandable why the kid changed so quickly since he has his past life memories and thats all he knows and how he knows to act and due to being in constant life and death situatuons he views situations and everything differently thats actually perfectly normal.
kennykangaroo2
kennykangaroo2Lv4

Totally agree I got turned off by the time they saved some foreign politician because till that point there had been nothing but back to back combat nonstop. When you say forced I agree with that because the kids are barely given more than a paragraph if any till they became hardened/determined to fight. This novel just makes me think back to the novel God and Devil World(3/5) where after like 300 or fewer chapters the author goes full throttle into the combat leaving out anything else almost entirely changing the tune of the novel and when it finally slows down every once in a while its just for a few paragraphs at most till it goes back to several chapters worth of mindnumbing nonstop combat and I say this after reading 961 of the 1061 chapters so disappointing.

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