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_Eisen_Lv153yr
2021-03-24 08:32

So, this was for the longest time one of my favourite romances in this site, but after reading 1580 chapters in going to have to call it quits for now. The characters and tension used to be fun and exciting, but now the story is just getting dragged along like a bad soap opera with pointless drama and fake tension. Some might wonder why this is, and it's sacristy write easy to identify: once the main problem a story starts with had been resolved, it needs to end before it gets boring. The annoying thing is that the writing quality and characters aren't bad in any way, I just.... don't care about what'll happen anymore. Trying to force more plot into what should be a 'happily ever after' or epilogue is annoying. Also, what happened to the special abilities the heirs of the main families were supposed to have? I thought this would be important somehow

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Vividly_Dawn
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yes, I think I agree. I feel like stop reading now after they finally decided to reveal their status as husband and wife. like... it's enough. even I still love to read because the writing is not boring at all. but not eagerly continue reading

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