Item: The Long-awaited Mr Han
Rating: 3.4
Author: Unniesangbukid

UnniesangbukidLv145yr

2019-04-23 11:31

As a reader, I felt that there's something lacking the way the story written. I am not an expert in writing however in a redear's point of view I can sense that something is not quite well. I hope the author can find it and improve that area. As to the development of plot.. I can say its there and there is only a little bit of similarities to some story that I have read. I hope there will be more unique twist as the story develops. 😊

The Long-awaited Mr Han

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I also feel the same as you. It's a good story but something's not quite there.

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Agree. Could be the filler in every chapter, the rushed/forced feelings from the male lead, or the male lead not so mature character at least to me. And it doesn't make sense a lot of the times, especially with the vixens family..

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