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Nanow31
Nanow31Lv116yr
2019-04-17 21:27

This novel is literally just filler; they spend four chapters going back and forth over the same exact argument, rewording it slightly every time, just padding out the novel, and end on a cliff every time to make you think the next chapter would be actual story content, like it would in any other novel. I literally had to skim this to get any semblance of enjoyment from it, which is sad since it would be a good novel if they stopped adding so much filler! As it is, this novel is just SS bait, and should be ignored.

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Nanow31
Nanow31Lv11

To be clear, by chapter 38 there’s about 6 chapters of actual content.

Kerail
KerailLv12

I would not rate it with 1 star but I do have to agree with what you did write. The actual content and progress is very slow. So if you are after faster plot development it then the book is not for you. Most of the writing is to wringe out readers feelings. The main feeling you get is anger and hate agenst people who wrong the mc. If you have had something similar that has hapened to yourself (not maby that extrme thow) then the you will feel intense hate and anger reading this. Mostly books that make you feel a lot are good books. But I may end up droping this because it only makes you feel negative stuff.

Nanow31
Nanow31Lv11

I wanted to edit my review, but couldn’t find it; around chapter 50 it picks up, you might want to skip ahead.

Kerail:I would not rate it with 1 star but I do have to agree with what you did write. The actual content and progress is very slow. So if you are after faster plot development it then the book is not for you. Most of the writing is to wringe out readers feelings. The main feeling you get is anger and hate agenst people who wrong the mc. If you have had something similar that has hapened to yourself (not maby that extrme thow) then the you will feel intense hate and anger reading this. Mostly books that make you feel a lot are good books. But I may end up droping this because it only makes you feel negative stuff.
Nanow31
Nanow31Lv11

I’ve skimmed further, and somewhere around chapter 40-50 it picks up; just skim a bit before that and skip to there if you want to read a decent novel.

BCF
BCFLv6

Yes. They have gone premium. No point wasting SS reading although I did find the storyline pretty interesting but with such slow progression in the story, am afraid I don't have that much SS to spare.

ArtistaFeel
ArtistaFeelLv4

Bored? Try this novel "Lyricist: Her Revenge" I'm sure you'll fall for it. You can thank me later 😊😊

40fantasy
40fantasyLv15

I completely agree. I love the MCs interactions, hence my interest, but I don’t think I’ll spend SS reading over 3000 chapters of flashbacks and fast forwarding.πŸ˜€

40fantasy
40fantasyLv15

I completely agree. I love the MCs interactions, hence my interest, but I don’t think I’ll spend SS reading over 3000 chapters of flashbacks and fast forwarding.πŸ˜€

TheRealGoddess18
TheRealGoddess18Lv1

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Kelda_Euzebe
Kelda_EuzebeLv12

why not just put out all the chapters if they're already ready. you already charge so much to read a chapter and still want to charge for people to read chapters in advance when the chapters is already out. I'd have understood if the chapters wasn't ready and we would have to wait. But you actually want to be charging people extra just to read chapters that you already have out.

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