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SinfishLv65yr
2019-03-10 10:36

Perhaps the dullest level-up game system novel I have read out of dozens, there's absolutely nothing here you haven't read before if you've read half a dozen in the genre. To be frank, I read the first forty chapters a couple of days ago, and I could not remember the plot until I opened it to refresh myself. The MC's personality is wildly inconsistent and he keeps doing dumb things that plot armor saves him from. For example, he gets a key to open up an S-rank dungeon, thinks to himself, "only a team of S-ranks can clear S-rank dungeons", then goes in and almost dies to the first monster and only doesn't by sheer and utter luck that it's in the only class of monster he gets a buff against. His system has an automatic growth cheat, which is a big problem, because he gets stronger every day with minimal effort... but he still goes off an risks his life for no reason at all, because he has no unusual motivation to do anything. He's almost died half a dozen times in the first 30 chapters, and there's no reason for him to, because he literally gets stronger every single day, and again, he has zero motivation for risking his life. Also, literally every other person he runs into is a villain out to kill people. This is absurd, because they essentially live in a near-future S. Korea and society and the superhumans are supposed to be well-regulated. He's spent his entire life being a bottom-rank loser and hasn't died, yet as soon as he gets super-powers all of a sudden everyone he runs into is trying to murder people. It all feels like a barely coherent freshman author attempt in an over-saturated genre, and I just can't understand why this story is rated highly at all.

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SkulitLv5

Yeah, and dont forget bad romance, "owh he doesnt smell bad, and so stronk make my heartbeat go wild, I think Im in love" then dense MC appear, MC try to play politic and soo poor at communication and planning, MC not smart, When all his shadow kneeling and worship him like a god trying so hard like overlord its so cringe...

mrk8824Lv5

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NetherlichtLv14

Finally a review that seems realistic instead of "uugh I leki systemp nubels" Main character is so dumb I grew frustrated reading it

JoyKillLv15

Reading this novel felt like watching one of the Bollywood movies, plenty of actions but no commonsense

ChummLv10

Agree..totally agree.. The start was good but it went downhill pretty soon

YunCheGODLv13

Wrong. It's still one of the best. Try reading all of it. Not only is it a complete novel, it also has no inconsistencies. Plot, 'reason', everything is dictated by logic and thoughts we get to actually read. Do yourself a favor and don't comment next time you plan to post something negative

ArtistaFeelLv4

A brand new novel awaits your support Try it once "Lyricist: Her Revenge"

Archangel50Lv5

Yes, there were some inconsistences in the start of the novel, and some characters were underdeveloped, but most of them and all of them described above are explained in the novel. Go read chapter 220.

PinkWhiskersLv2

I couldn't agree more. There is no character development at all! MC's character is too weak, he is a slave of his own powers.

Wei_iinLv6

👍👍

RianaadraLv5

Wew better stick to the comic i guess .. the comic is sure interesting with the great arts and i think its the best novel adaptation along with TGD (still havent read the novel)

BI5MALv11

Chapter 40 ain't reach the depth imho. But everyone have their own taste. So it's understandable for some it's not their cup of tea

Just_a_personLv5

No, just no. It has already consumed many of my brain cells just to comprehend the magnitude of the Mc’s stupidity and dumb-**** luck, just no.

YunCheGOD:Wrong. It's still one of the best. Try reading all of it. Not only is it a complete novel, it also has no inconsistencies. Plot, 'reason', everything is dictated by logic and thoughts we get to actually read. Do yourself a favor and don't comment next time you plan to post something negative
bayawaksamalaLv4

I guess luck is also part of his superpowers 😊, but still i kinda found it more interesting

Just_a_person:No, just no. It has already consumed many of my brain cells just to comprehend the magnitude of the Mc’s stupidity and dumb-**** luck, just no.
bayawaksamalaLv4

You misunderstood. As what he said in those earlier chapters "this is what the system needs, a stronger version of myself" , "the system uses me, the i will use the system"

PinkWhiskers:I couldn't agree more. There is no character development at all! MC's character is too weak, he is a slave of his own powers.
Rk6TLv4

after his second revaulation, he becomes badass although he is super dense in terms of women its better than a pussy mc who gets used by women and cat stand up for himself

SleepwriteLv10

He saw more enemies because as he leveled up the end of time got closer. Him becoming stronger was a sort of catalyst. Therefore, please fully understand a novel before giving it a reckless review. Also, I think his actions are well articulated in the story. I haven’t read the web novel version, yet but the previous one was an amazing story.

karliqueLv10

Very good review. I thought I was the only one who thought how ****ty it became when nobody on eart could topple that guy. Zero motivation.

Brody_ScottLv10

If you don’t like it don’t read it

Victor_FiusaLv11

Well, that has a lot of time now, but I just finish to read that novel now and I really suggest you to re-read it. The story turn way better on the middle and its turn to be very original, in addition to have a perfect ending, what's rare on that tipe of novel. Just give it a chance, I guarantee that you will not regret.

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