Netherlicht

Too abrupt for my tastes, the author jumps over pivotal story telling. "Show don't tell" He has done pretty well overall and hasn't just told us "and this happened" too much, it has been a good mix of both, but now it feels like the author sacrificed it to get to the action, like he himself said previously about the loyalty system "Narrative shortcut". Disappointing

No I didn't read it but I can tell you, that by reading his review I got exactly what I needed to avoid it "It has comedic undertones"

Correct me if I'm wrong but don't the Nilfgaardians have strict military discipline to the point of modern like rules about looting and pillaging.

It's really a great novel that has an annoyingly bad MTL. If you can look past that I recommend it. Surprisingly there a severe lack of Fanfictions that have this type of emotional build up. It has flaws but 99% of fanfictions have those same flaws only more exaggerated. This novel doesn't see the females in the novel as pokémon to collect. Also a lot of Mushoku fanfics tricks you and it turns out to be a multiverse novel and not a pure Mushoku fanficiton. This one is purely Mushoku, and that's great.

Your review is valid and makes me rethink reading this, but considering it has the Comedy tag, I could chalk it up to being for comedy's sake he's edgy and not entirely a fault of the writing. Not to my tastes tho, so thanks

Meh this was disappointing. Summoned beasts at least had some sort of belonging in Naruto world. This cringy cyclops just feels straight out of xianxia

People selling out children for power saying that he is dishonorable for using poison and traps. Pure tardation

Damn he ruined Arcueid and made her an author with 8 grader syndrom who just hangs around like a lapdog... Not to mention Issei into a joke pervert. And Kiritsugu into whatever the f kind of character he is now. This novel for all its good points is going straight down the shitter with each chapter

So they left their 5 year old daughter alone with her sibling while going overseas, I preferred the Camelot arc because it becomes cringe whenever the author tries to make dumb decisions like this to keep Canon characters around with leaps in logic. Just me?

The author clearly just changed his mind, if he was sorted into griffindor with sufficient reason then fine but he influenced it. And as soon as he thought not getting involved with Harry he immediefly went ahead and did. He didn't harbor much hate for Malfoy but couldn't resist to make them adversaries. I hope the OG author stays more consistent in the story with what the character thinks and then ultimetly does. Or at least stops with floppy reasoning on why the character changes his mind. Maybe author was heavily pressured by his readers idk