Item: Beast Cultivating System
Rating: 4.4
Author: ImperialEdge

ImperialEdgeLv56yr

2018-12-28 04:47

Love the novel, other than some minor issues this book is a gold mine. Issues include minimal world background, and inconsistent and dichotomous characterization. Other than that, I want more!!

Beast Cultivating System

dox991

4.1

85 Chs

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dox991Author

Hi everyone this is my first novel, so it might be some errors here and there so just bear with me... I do read comments, so feel free to share and I will take them into account throughout the novel.

6yr

JabaRuneLv11

As someone that reads a lot of translated novels, I'm pretty tolerant towards bad grammar, poorly formatted sentences, weird usages of words and poor writing in general, but reading this novel made me want to scream. It's a shame because I like what's going on in the story and I really want to keep reading, to know what happens next, but I just can't stand how badly written it is. There is constant redundancy. Transition words and other unnecessary words are everywhere. I guess I'll just give an example. This is from the prologue, which is already better written than the regular chapters: "Dana always felt like that living such a ****** life was not meant for her and that she wanted something more, something which could make her blood boil. She didn't fulfil her parents wish in going to university getting a law degree and taking over the family's law firm, and it led to her current status as women in her mid-thirties who hasn't developed a serious relationship once in her life. Although being beautiful has gotten Dana many suitors over the years, as she could never make herself to settle down and start a family as it comes at the sacrifice of her current adventurous lifestyle to cease, which for Dana wasn't something she was willing to accept." Now look how many fewer words there are while retaining the same meaning and level of detail: "Her parents wanted her to get a law degree and take over the family's law firm, but such a ****** life wasn't meant for her. She wanted something more, something to make her blood boil. Despite being beautiful and having many suitors, she was never willing to sacrifice her adventurous lifestyle to developed a serious relationship. Even now, in her mid-thirties, she wasn't ready to settle down and have a family." The worst thing about all of this is that the author's comments (that I've read) are perfectly legible. You're obviously competent enough, so why are you making me sift through garbage to get the story? I can't comment much on the character, plot and world development because I couldn't make it past chapter 6, but so far they seem fine. I hope the author doesn't give up. P.S. 'so' and 'therefore' mean the same damn thing. Stop putting both of them right next to each other at the start of a sentence.

6yr

madesaturdayLv14

This is brief review of the story so far. There isn't much to grasp due to the book just beginning. I've rated the story 3/5 to give a boost and as a baseline so it's neither bad nor good. Unfortunately, It may devolve over time as the story is another one relating to systems. Not all system novels are bad but... yeah? System novels in general are poorly written and executed. The start of the story is meh, but then again, nothing happened. So this has the potential to be great if the author doesn't rely to heavily on spamming system paragraphs through chapters.

6yr

HatsyCrowLv4

Reveal spoiler

4yr

FilledWithHopeLv5

The English is horrible. The info stuffed down your throat in the first seven chapters (pre prologue) is pointless and could've been easily introduced in one.

6yr

Ds16Lv12

Awesome story and the frequency of the updates is better than other stories I can’t wait till the mc will find a good match that she can’t completely overpower or is to strong for her to retaliate against.

6yr

UliosLv14

It's awsome. :D \O/ \O/ \O/ \O/ \O/ \O/ \O/ \O/ \O/ \O/ \O/ \O/ \O/ \O/ \O/ \O/ \O/ \O/ \O/ \O/ \O/ \O/ \O/ \O/ \O/ \O/ \O/ \O/ \O/ \O/ \O/ \O/ \O/ \O/ \O/ \O/ \O/ \O/ \O/ \O/

6yr

KaPiLv4

At first I was like, ahhh is this gonna be another one of those people raising beasts that are really OP, but the person themselves are weak af? But then, when I realised the MC herself was a dragon I was like YAAASSSSSS. So in my opinion everything's great, except the UPDATES.

5yr

blooLv14

I really like the MC here. We have honest to god character development, which is insane to me. It's fun watching the MC go from sparing people to plotting their demise. It's also funny that she's incredibly out of tune with the world. Concepts like 'face' have no meaning to her, so she gives it exactly no fucks. She's the perfect mix of personality traits, almost feels like an actual logical person. Arrogant when she can be, humble when she needs to be. I hate reading those stories about some godly badass reincarnating into the body of some dreg with no power... AND STILL ACTING LIKE HE'S A GOD. Even worse when everything just works out for them regardless, it's so stupid. And the romance.... or should I say lack of it. Thank buddha for that, I haven't read a single story with a female MC that didn't make me want to claw my eyes out. Defo give this one a read.

6yr

Death... and me

Read the first chapter. Maybe you will like it. ;)

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