I honest lay would score lower if possible on some of these ratings, but its low enough to see how I feel about this novel. After reading this I now know not all ratinags mean good books. This story suffers from such cliché writing tropes, and lacks in basically everything. Also autocorrect is kinda a nightmare with this tablet. Main Character: The main character is the bain of my existence, she's arrogant, prideful, and very unbelievable. At the beginning she can't even kill a human even though he was trying to Enslave Her, yet at the same time she can kill hundreds of animals without a care in the world. However, later in the novel she kills tons of contestants even though they did nothing wrong. She also is kinda bipolar (even though she's usually scoffing at men or annoyed) as getting more types of "purities" would change her personality, sometimes? Her greedy phase was the most insuffersble, as it becomes her driving point for way too long. Thankfully the anther stopped it, but the damage was already done. I do have more to rant about, but I'm not going to make this any longer. Side Characters: Not much in here, Dana doesn't hang out with people that much to any people in early chapters. But the system is one the best characters in novel, it was a good contrast to the main character, sadly they don't show up very often. If I'm correct there's this guy in school that Dana sorta helps, but he made so little impact or apperance. The teachers, they weren't interesting, at all. I think Dana that women teacher say some drama which probably ended up with some dead men. Somewhere on 50 or 60 Dana gets dispells, and I thought FINALLY I I don't have to suffer as badly anymore! But one might as well be a ghost and the other one was a lustful masochist demon thing. JUST what I've always DREAMED OF. Aka they suck. Updating: They or i think He updated quite frequently, but he went on hiatus so, 3 stars for dumping it. Better than ok but not great. Story Development: The story of plot is almost nonexistent till more than half way in the novel (the 77 chapters). I guess her leveling up and infiltrating human territory could be plot, but its all boring. Whats the main plot point you ask? Sorry I didn't read it, at that point I was skipping and skimming chapters, and given the Beast Cultivating system it wouldn't change a thing. Character Design: I don't have much to say here really. In not going to accuse the author of making no character design but I just done remember anything. Well other than MC being Super Hoooot, yet for some reason despite being an Frost dragon have black hair (just a nitpick). World Background: The world is your standered medieval fantasy world nothing fancy. That and the alarming amount of predatory men, seriously every background character wants to rape, bang, or kill Dana. The first people/men she encounters as a human talk about raping her. And how could I have forgot the Insane amount of times im reminded about her being Hoooooot. Plus the way men in this novel are protrayed is an embarrassment and like how SJWs very the world. Women are spiteful and hate Dana for her Hoooooootness. Both genders will be nice time to time for the plot or to be a stepping stone for the protagonist. If you read this entire thing I appaude you, coungrates I have wrote something worth reading unlike this book. To the author if you even read this, I don't hate you of course your story's just really suck. Im not a professional so I can't give you counstructive criticism. But if this is your passion keep writing, it gets better. Trust me drawing is also quite the drain sometimes.
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