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airambach26
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2020-08-15 18:42

Author I really don’t like the principle of mc not using his power moves that could turn his enemy into broken soul plus, I know when there is rape expect the woman to be pregnant and I would say this bull**** those child they should die they are nothing more than just a bastard child every race should be killed I’m someone who hate rape(people who treat woman nothing more than just a monster) they don’t need to be in society even if they are force to join to make themselves degrade they could have stopped this but they let their instincts, before people dis mi out how the bastard children from rape woman , I say they are not good even if they are new it’s their parent fault I was liking this novel at when It was at the naruto verse, however when it get to the next one my god all I see is a stupid mc who don’t even torture the men who rape women nothing more than just a toy, plus what kind of mage he is where he could help people lose that trauma and even make the woman have a way to revert them rape . I’ll stop ranting now as I really hate many things n it but also like I just hope author don’t make mc someone who is forgiving person and seing a bastard child is clean .

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TricksterDrasvel
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Thank you, I hope you well. Now let's begin: 1. Soul magic is used by his enemy and ever since then, the use of it has been banned. There is speculation that studying the soul is what drove his enemy mad, got influenced by Chaos, therefore, MC doesn't want to use it to attract Chaos, little did he know he has already attracted Chaos, so it doesn't really matter if he uses Soul Magic. 2. Then we have a different opinion, I also hate rape, but I don't blame the children as a result of it. Now let's talk about the story, MC just state his opinion, it doesn't mean they have followed him, the issue Claudia brought is just food supply since the population will explode, but MC can provide help, and that's it. As for whether the baby will be born or not, it actually up to each woman later. 3. What are you talking about? In Rad, some of his enemies suffer a burn from his blue fire before they died, some bleeding to death because their limbs have been severed, those are tortures in my book. 4. Mind, Space, Time, and Soul, these four were the hardest field of magic, the only field that has advanced in his time was Space and Soul, but Mind and Time were still left behind. 5. Of course, some can say MC has the ability to make them forget, but he can only do it for a recent event, these women has been raped for days, and if MC forces to make them forget far further, it will implicate their brain. Whether you agree or not, the brain is the one of the most complicated system but required delicate approach, one wrong perhaps can ruin the entire brain.

PettyOfficer
PettyOfficerLv6

Reading this review made me tired.

Boobaslurper
BoobaslurperLv4

wtf?! you hate children that born from raped women? dude, are you right in the head? the women that got raped, they are victim of VIOLENCE ACT! and the children that born, you think they choose to be born themselves?! you think they choose to become 'bastard' child?! put your brain inside your head, dude! dont put it in your ass! so that you can think!

Beziik
BeziikLv14

Dude can't even make his speech sound coherent and you expect him to reason? *sigh* people like this are allowed to vote

Boobaslurper:wtf?! you hate children that born from raped women? dude, are you right in the head? the women that got raped, they are victim of VIOLENCE ACT! and the children that born, you think they choose to be born themselves?! you think they choose to become 'bastard' child?! put your brain inside your head, dude! dont put it in your ass! so that you can think!
SageOfSins
SageOfSinsLv3

why are you dumping all responsibility on MC when all actions are controlled by you... don't hide behind facades atleast own up to your mistakes, just say sorry and tell them to leave your story alone if they don't like it... why are you being such a wuss about simple dilemma and making it more complicated..

TricksterDrasvel:Thank you, I hope you well. Now let's begin: 1. Soul magic is used by his enemy and ever since then, the use of it has been banned. There is speculation that studying the soul is what drove his enemy mad, got influenced by Chaos, therefore, MC doesn't want to use it to attract Chaos, little did he know he has already attracted Chaos, so it doesn't really matter if he uses Soul Magic. 2. Then we have a different opinion, I also hate rape, but I don't blame the children as a result of it. Now let's talk about the story, MC just state his opinion, it doesn't mean they have followed him, the issue Claudia brought is just food supply since the population will explode, but MC can provide help, and that's it. As for whether the baby will be born or not, it actually up to each woman later. 3. What are you talking about? In Rad, some of his enemies suffer a burn from his blue fire before they died, some bleeding to death because their limbs have been severed, those are tortures in my book. 4. Mind, Space, Time, and Soul, these four were the hardest field of magic, the only field that has advanced in his time was Space and Soul, but Mind and Time were still left behind. 5. Of course, some can say MC has the ability to make them forget, but he can only do it for a recent event, these women has been raped for days, and if MC forces to make them forget far further, it will implicate their brain. Whether you agree or not, the brain is the one of the most complicated system but required delicate approach, one wrong perhaps can ruin the entire brain.
TricksterDrasvel
TricksterDrasvelAuthor

why are you care?

SageOfSins:why are you dumping all responsibility on MC when all actions are controlled by you... don't hide behind facades atleast own up to your mistakes, just say sorry and tell them to leave your story alone if they don't like it... why are you being such a wuss about simple dilemma and making it more complicated..
SageOfSins
SageOfSinsLv3

what? what does 'why are you care' means? I genuinely don't know how you are getting readers with such English vocabulary mistakes. Really need to watch out for more surprises from you, if you use such English sentence structure..

FoodReviewSnake
FoodReviewSnakeLv4

bye

TricksterDrasvel:Thank you, I hope you well. Now let's begin: 1. Soul magic is used by his enemy and ever since then, the use of it has been banned. There is speculation that studying the soul is what drove his enemy mad, got influenced by Chaos, therefore, MC doesn't want to use it to attract Chaos, little did he know he has already attracted Chaos, so it doesn't really matter if he uses Soul Magic. 2. Then we have a different opinion, I also hate rape, but I don't blame the children as a result of it. Now let's talk about the story, MC just state his opinion, it doesn't mean they have followed him, the issue Claudia brought is just food supply since the population will explode, but MC can provide help, and that's it. As for whether the baby will be born or not, it actually up to each woman later. 3. What are you talking about? In Rad, some of his enemies suffer a burn from his blue fire before they died, some bleeding to death because their limbs have been severed, those are tortures in my book. 4. Mind, Space, Time, and Soul, these four were the hardest field of magic, the only field that has advanced in his time was Space and Soul, but Mind and Time were still left behind. 5. Of course, some can say MC has the ability to make them forget, but he can only do it for a recent event, these women has been raped for days, and if MC forces to make them forget far further, it will implicate their brain. Whether you agree or not, the brain is the one of the most complicated system but required delicate approach, one wrong perhaps can ruin the entire brain.
PublishedLeaf
PublishedLeafLv14

I agree with all thepointa ive read herw but cant tell if they arwnt in the book. so ill give it a readm

TricksterDrasvel:Thank you, I hope you well. Now let's begin: 1. Soul magic is used by his enemy and ever since then, the use of it has been banned. There is speculation that studying the soul is what drove his enemy mad, got influenced by Chaos, therefore, MC doesn't want to use it to attract Chaos, little did he know he has already attracted Chaos, so it doesn't really matter if he uses Soul Magic. 2. Then we have a different opinion, I also hate rape, but I don't blame the children as a result of it. Now let's talk about the story, MC just state his opinion, it doesn't mean they have followed him, the issue Claudia brought is just food supply since the population will explode, but MC can provide help, and that's it. As for whether the baby will be born or not, it actually up to each woman later. 3. What are you talking about? In Rad, some of his enemies suffer a burn from his blue fire before they died, some bleeding to death because their limbs have been severed, those are tortures in my book. 4. Mind, Space, Time, and Soul, these four were the hardest field of magic, the only field that has advanced in his time was Space and Soul, but Mind and Time were still left behind. 5. Of course, some can say MC has the ability to make them forget, but he can only do it for a recent event, these women has been raped for days, and if MC forces to make them forget far further, it will implicate their brain. Whether you agree or not, the brain is the one of the most complicated system but required delicate approach, one wrong perhaps can ruin the entire brain.
Mko
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SecretWolf
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Decent start goes down from there. The story starts off in Naruto world which was doing ok. Then the next world was just shit. The problem is the MC after 1000 years is still an absolute idiot. The premise of the story, is him going to a different world and getting his harem. But the author decides to make him a total hero that would not touch another person's girlfriend. The very fact that he will go different world means he will be taking someone's women so the shit reason the Author comes up with trying to justify his action while maintaining the Heroic bullshit that he will not take another is huge plot hole and make you want to puke. In the second world, he lets rapist go one time, another time massacres them. The MC seems like a psychopath without clear reasoning. The Author and plot do everything to make him look heroic but that makes the immersion broken. I do not know why the author wants to make him into a goody-two-shoes, while he goes around collecting harem and yes NTRs people no matter how much the author tries to say otherwise. Had the Author braved it out and just not cared about the stupid rules of not touching another person's women then it would have been decent I can't take it right now. IF it does get better and the MC stops acting like a child let me know I will read ahead but the second arc is where I will stop. The best way to describe the story is there is a pros---ute who wants to be the holiest nun and at the same time hold the best prost---de trophy while getting bangged every night.

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