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InHisName
InHisNameLv64yr
2020-10-13 05:17

I regret reading this novel... The MC is just too hypocritically righteous to be a fun character. Why send someone so pathetic to a cruel world like Kuroino? To just highlight the world's cruelty, and MC's weakness? Don't read if you expect reasonable characterisation/reasonable story development!

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thank

John_nut
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Thanks. I had a feeling when i read the prologue that this Author is not serious anyway. Lucky didnt read this garbage any further.

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SecretWolf
SecretWolfLv3

Decent start goes down from there. The story starts off in Naruto world which was doing ok. Then the next world was just shit. The problem is the MC after 1000 years is still an absolute idiot. The premise of the story, is him going to a different world and getting his harem. But the author decides to make him a total hero that would not touch another person's girlfriend. The very fact that he will go different world means he will be taking someone's women so the shit reason the Author comes up with trying to justify his action while maintaining the Heroic bullshit that he will not take another is huge plot hole and make you want to puke. In the second world, he lets rapist go one time, another time massacres them. The MC seems like a psychopath without clear reasoning. The Author and plot do everything to make him look heroic but that makes the immersion broken. I do not know why the author wants to make him into a goody-two-shoes, while he goes around collecting harem and yes NTRs people no matter how much the author tries to say otherwise. Had the Author braved it out and just not cared about the stupid rules of not touching another person's women then it would have been decent I can't take it right now. IF it does get better and the MC stops acting like a child let me know I will read ahead but the second arc is where I will stop. The best way to describe the story is there is a pros---ute who wants to be the holiest nun and at the same time hold the best prost---de trophy while getting bangged every night.

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