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Death_Monarch
Death_MonarchLv23yr
2021-02-10 11:59

Why did you have to Erase it now while I was reading🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬😑🀬😑🀬😑🀬😑🀬😑🀬😑🀬😑🀬😑🀬😑🀬😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒

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TheDNAlien
TheDNAlienLv15

I know, I already aught up to this before it was deleted but I also added one of his other stories too....never got to read it and I just saw it was all deleted....which led me to see this is also deleted πŸ˜“ man I hate it when stories are dropped and then wiped, atleast leave it there for others to read and maybe someone else will want to pick it up 😭

21iknowsomething
21iknowsomethingLv4

ikr i was just starting and it was a good novel but then it stopped working i was like huh? then found out it was deleted I was like noooooo, it was a good novel why??????

Eternal_Jokr
Eternal_JokrLv3

-He returned \[T]/

21iknowsomething:ikr i was just starting and it was a good novel but then it stopped working i was like huh? then found out it was deleted I was like noooooo, it was a good novel why??????
Eternal_Jokr
Eternal_JokrLv3

-He returned \[T]/

TheDNAlien:I know, I already aught up to this before it was deleted but I also added one of his other stories too....never got to read it and I just saw it was all deleted....which led me to see this is also deleted πŸ˜“ man I hate it when stories are dropped and then wiped, atleast leave it there for others to read and maybe someone else will want to pick it up 😭
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SecretWolf
SecretWolfLv3

Decent start goes down from there. The story starts off in Naruto world which was doing ok. Then the next world was just shit. The problem is the MC after 1000 years is still an absolute idiot. The premise of the story, is him going to a different world and getting his harem. But the author decides to make him a total hero that would not touch another person's girlfriend. The very fact that he will go different world means he will be taking someone's women so the shit reason the Author comes up with trying to justify his action while maintaining the Heroic bullshit that he will not take another is huge plot hole and make you want to puke. In the second world, he lets rapist go one time, another time massacres them. The MC seems like a psychopath without clear reasoning. The Author and plot do everything to make him look heroic but that makes the immersion broken. I do not know why the author wants to make him into a goody-two-shoes, while he goes around collecting harem and yes NTRs people no matter how much the author tries to say otherwise. Had the Author braved it out and just not cared about the stupid rules of not touching another person's women then it would have been decent I can't take it right now. IF it does get better and the MC stops acting like a child let me know I will read ahead but the second arc is where I will stop. The best way to describe the story is there is a pros---ute who wants to be the holiest nun and at the same time hold the best prost---de trophy while getting bangged every night.

wit_daface
wit_dafaceLv4
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