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Seer_
Seer_Lv116yr
2019-01-16 08:39

Best ever, DBZ (Dragon Ball Z) fan-fiction I would ever read, I'm not going to be relaying information to how good it is, cause it won't you curious to how addicting this drug is, I am already addicted へ(゜∇、°)へ

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xelita007x
xelita007xLv11

Yay

DearCompanion
DearCompanionLv4

Don't bother reading this novel, mc write millions of info dumps about how his power would be controllable and when he fight frost He wins and dominate frost but he keep that creature alive until this creature annoy him by cutting his tail and VOaLA, mc become useless and idiot beast who attack without thinking not bothering about millions words of how he trains to control his strength and millions of abilities he had on his body that he built so far from chapter 1 No romance only info dumps.

Seer_
Seer_Lv11

By each perspective of the readers, readers will see it differently in numerous ways. One might it enjoy the info dump, while other, not. Generally, I appreciate the novel of how descriptive it is, but too much can be excessive. The novel is good, but not to say it is engaging to the common audience.

DearCompanion:Don't bother reading this novel, mc write millions of info dumps about how his power would be controllable and when he fight frost He wins and dominate frost but he keep that creature alive until this creature annoy him by cutting his tail and VOaLA, mc become useless and idiot beast who attack without thinking not bothering about millions words of how he trains to control his strength and millions of abilities he had on his body that he built so far from chapter 1 No romance only info dumps.
MonkeReviewer
MonkeReviewerLv4

The mc is literally doing stuff that just annoying and the information could be shortened and he is just straight of powerful without doing something that involves hard work like he could fight a god and survive and then later on go to get a forms and get overpowered and he is quite literally almost taking everything as a joke. Ps. If I where to have immense power stronger than him I would take his torture it by using illusions that makes him see it from the perspective of the people he pranks or worried them and but before that I would temporarily seal his memory about him and put the memory of the ones he pranks or worried and let him feel how they feel and also before all that I would seal all of his power and also beat him up and make him go through his old life through illusion and tell him that the moment he enter other worlds the world is now real. P.** I hate the fact that almost every mc takes what they have for granted and forget that they are now in a real world for them at least.

Seer_:By each perspective of the readers, readers will see it differently in numerous ways. One might it enjoy the info dump, while other, not. Generally, I appreciate the novel of how descriptive it is, but too much can be excessive. The novel is good, but not to say it is engaging to the common audience.
Seer_
Seer_Lv11

Though I agree with you, this review was a year ago. I like the story how it is as this is just a novel that doesn't align with reality. The purpose of the story and general novels as a whole is to entertain an audience, not just hardwork by the MC. Just understand some people will see it differently, we are not all the same.

MonkeReviewer:The mc is literally doing stuff that just annoying and the information could be shortened and he is just straight of powerful without doing something that involves hard work like he could fight a god and survive and then later on go to get a forms and get overpowered and he is quite literally almost taking everything as a joke. Ps. If I where to have immense power stronger than him I would take his torture it by using illusions that makes him see it from the perspective of the people he pranks or worried them and but before that I would temporarily seal his memory about him and put the memory of the ones he pranks or worried and let him feel how they feel and also before all that I would seal all of his power and also beat him up and make him go through his old life through illusion and tell him that the moment he enter other worlds the world is now real. P.** I hate the fact that almost every mc takes what they have for granted and forget that they are now in a real world for them at least.
Lucas_Oliveira_2302
Lucas_Oliveira_2302Lv1

this story is great continue like this please do the arc of the power tournament and do the broly have a daughter called bra stealing the vegeta idea and putting her in the place of the trunks she has to be very powerful because she is broly's daughter with a human and you should also be very smart

Urion_Limitbreaker
Urion_LimitbreakerLv3

This is the best Dragonball MC story of Broly I have ever read and enjoy. I hoped to see more chapters in the later future. 👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿

ANDRGENOUS
ANDRGENOUSLv4

xp

Eid_zack
Eid_zackLv4

It is a great story but the plot of world a bit weird

TheGolden_Ghoul
TheGolden_GhoulLv3

Alright then, I’m diving in. Hope you are right.

tera11
tera11Lv11

Ty

Oscar_G
Oscar_GLv4

bro no need for romance in a dragon ball fanfiction in dragon ball there is barely romance so why did you mention romance

DearCompanion:Don't bother reading this novel, mc write millions of info dumps about how his power would be controllable and when he fight frost He wins and dominate frost but he keep that creature alive until this creature annoy him by cutting his tail and VOaLA, mc become useless and idiot beast who attack without thinking not bothering about millions words of how he trains to control his strength and millions of abilities he had on his body that he built so far from chapter 1 No romance only info dumps.
18484746
18484746Lv4

Is there romance in this. does he get a saiyan girl

diochu
diochuLv4

NO he was in control he was just pretending idiot and there is a litle romance later. im guessing you dropt it when he kost his tail? BIGGGG MISTAKE!!!

DearCompanion:Don't bother reading this novel, mc write millions of info dumps about how his power would be controllable and when he fight frost He wins and dominate frost but he keep that creature alive until this creature annoy him by cutting his tail and VOaLA, mc become useless and idiot beast who attack without thinking not bothering about millions words of how he trains to control his strength and millions of abilities he had on his body that he built so far from chapter 1 No romance only info dumps.
Reallymady
ReallymadyLv2

the main character was only acting like he lost control if u read that chapter to the end u would know

DearCompanion:Don't bother reading this novel, mc write millions of info dumps about how his power would be controllable and when he fight frost He wins and dominate frost but he keep that creature alive until this creature annoy him by cutting his tail and VOaLA, mc become useless and idiot beast who attack without thinking not bothering about millions words of how he trains to control his strength and millions of abilities he had on his body that he built so far from chapter 1 No romance only info dumps.
MonkeReviewer
MonkeReviewerLv4

Gosh was I really that delusional!??

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