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DearCompanion
DearCompanionLv44yr
2020-09-11 07:43

Shitty fanfic with idiot protagonist who help the canon mc make out with their partner. i don't know what fuc*ed up thinking mr.author has....

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DearCompanion
DearCompanionLv4

for example, he help yuki rito to be alpha mc for no reason, wth, he should get the girls for himself. Another is that he leaves bulma for years. I don't want to read this again and I see the chapter title vegeta or yamcha at the latter half of the novel, I assume that she had been used by both of these dudes while mc was traveling in the outer space.

LOLRIP
LOLRIPLv3

Please try Dragon Ball (revised) and review it if you feel like it

DearCompanion:for example, he help yuki rito to be alpha mc for no reason, wth, he should get the girls for himself. Another is that he leaves bulma for years. I don't want to read this again and I see the chapter title vegeta or yamcha at the latter half of the novel, I assume that she had been used by both of these dudes while mc was traveling in the outer space.
DriftingDragon
DriftingDragonLv13

Thats what i am reading now... its a good novel

LOLRIP:Please try Dragon Ball (revised) and review it if you feel like it
dozkiller07
dozkiller07Lv4

lol did u just promote ur work.anyway I'm going to read it.i fed up reading the first chapter of this fic.never saw an idiot who is this idiotic to throw a tantrum with an existence who can basically erase him

LOLRIP:Please try Dragon Ball (revised) and review it if you feel like it
Mohamedk123
Mohamedk123Lv4

Most your complaints are just because u dislike what he did to his girls

DearCompanion:for example, he help yuki rito to be alpha mc for no reason, wth, he should get the girls for himself. Another is that he leaves bulma for years. I don't want to read this again and I see the chapter title vegeta or yamcha at the latter half of the novel, I assume that she had been used by both of these dudes while mc was traveling in the outer space.
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