Mostly clean but some miss spelling easy to overlook all in all it’s a great story. Try reading this story and help giving ideas, the author has a wonderful imagination which gives life to this story and keeps you coming back for more. I admit the fights were drawn out but it made me more attentive to small details also how he explains the plans which mind fucks you like WoW that actually makes sense and how everything the MC did some how had a meaning from the very beginning of the story I mean the very beginning 😂 that actually has an effect later on in the story. Overall in my book it’s perfect just because this story took up my entire week and I don’t mind spelling errors since he does fix it. THANK YOU AUTHOR I HOPE YOU CONTINUE THIS STORY AND THE UPCOMING DEVELOPMENTS OF BROLY🙏😁.
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