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Burst17
Burst17Author6yr
2018-12-17 18:00

Well, I'm not going to give myself 5 stars because I'm medium slow writing, also English is not my native language, so I apologize for any writing error

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Dame_ningen1
Dame_ningen1Lv15

Harem?

Endless_Clouds
Endless_CloudsLv5

Where are the chapters?

Burst17
Burst17Author

I'm editing them, just a little bit XD

Endless_Clouds:Where are the chapters?
Endless_Clouds
Endless_CloudsLv5

Thank You...

Burst17:I'm editing them, just a little bit XD
ErjasD
ErjasDLv13

Does this have harem or romance? pls answer..

Burst17
Burst17Author

Both

ErjasD:Does this have harem or romance? pls answer..
ErjasD
ErjasDLv13

Nice. I'm gonna read it now😁

Burst17:Both
BURNING
BURNINGLv5

what world is he in? isekai right?

Burst17
Burst17Author

yes

BURNING:what world is he in? isekai right?
Orginal_Panda
Orginal_PandaLv5

Is his system locked?

CliffkunLolRekt
CliffkunLolRektLv6

Yo bust been awhile yo I have a fan fic idea if your interested It has to do with bleach and naruto what you say XD If your not interested then i don’t wanna type my idea as it’s a paragraph lol and I have big thumbs

Burst17:I'm editing them, just a little bit XD
Burst17
Burst17Author

for this fanfic or a new one?

CliffkunLolRekt:Yo bust been awhile yo I have a fan fic idea if your interested It has to do with bleach and naruto what you say XD If your not interested then i don’t wanna type my idea as it’s a paragraph lol and I have big thumbs
CliffkunLolRekt
CliffkunLolRektLv6

A new one what do you say. XD Well that if you have watched naruto and bleach

Burst17:for this fanfic or a new one?
Burst17
Burst17Author

Well I watched all Naruto but Bleach I just watched half of it

CliffkunLolRekt:A new one what do you say. XD Well that if you have watched naruto and bleach
CliffkunLolRekt
CliffkunLolRektLv6

Ok I take it your interested have you seen ichigos full hollow transformation? Honestly you only need to have seen up to that point or know about it As wel as nellel lol if you know about those two then the idea can precede if not just look up Ichigo full hollow Transformation and nellel on youtube and we are good Basically Ichigo kills the soul king but at the cost of his own life soul king was the final boss in the manga the guy where the Quincy bloodline originated bad guy Nellel and orihime were in love with him but he died so they killed themselfes I’m grief and in hopes to meet him again Ichigos and the two girls were sent to naruto and Ichigo was reborn as a son of the jugo clan and the kaguya clan making a whole new bloodline hollow where Ichigo will accept his hollow side and merge like naruto did to gain control of his new hollow form that will only grow so long as he douse this will happen while he is asleep and his parents are dead He now has a usumaki level chalkra when he’s in his normal form but when in his hollow form he has a simalar amount of chalkra as the original amount of soul power he had He can only stay in hollow form a certain amount of time depending on how strong he is it ranges from chunin ect Tho he can do a partial transformation and gain the mask arm guards or only the chest at chunin ect The reason why his hollow form would work so well as a kekkegenkai is the jugo can is known for there bezerk tendences and there natral chalkra mode and the kaguy clan for there bone manipulation and use of bones for wepons Those two mix sounds like a hollow or a tailed beast both probably ran to konoha for shelter from there abusive clan but died from the kyubbe attack leaving Ichigo alone but a good amount of money and a good home to live in Orihime was reborn as a first born daughter of the ramen guy who was originally married to both a yamaka clan girl and a regular girl but the yanaka clan wife died from a disese She is 100 percent safe as that ramen guy probably knows everything going on in the village And nellel was born from a couple from a from inusaka clan and the and a crystal release girl Ino and tsunade would also be one of the mcs girls lol I always disliked the soul reaper power set and thought hollows were more badass and have way more potential Once Ichigo is noticed by hizoren as a potential kekke genkai holder he hid all the evidence but got him tested he found out he can pass it on to his kids so now Ichigo is a head of a clan but when it is announced will be the after the chunin exam Hizoren also will be a tad bit smarter and put more pressure on danzo also You notis how I made it so he won’t immediately be op and has to train like a madman to gain more acsess to his abiltys What you think I hope I did not type this out for nothing my thumbs are huge af lol

Burst17:Well I watched all Naruto but Bleach I just watched half of it
HaremsSuck
HaremsSuckLv4

please put a harem tag so I don't have to waste my time

Burst17:Both
flame6669
flame6669Lv14

Are you still writing or are you hiatus

Burst17
Burst17Author

I'm on hiatus dude, my laptop broke it doesn't turn on, and i can't write on my phone too many write mistakes, in a couple of months i will buy another pc, I'm really sorry for the hiatus

flame6669:Are you still writing or are you hiatus
flame6669
flame6669Lv14

thanks for the Info and have a lovely day

Burst17:I'm on hiatus dude, my laptop broke it doesn't turn on, and i can't write on my phone too many write mistakes, in a couple of months i will buy another pc, I'm really sorry for the hiatus
Shadewind
ShadewindLv6

Hope you continue the story as it is really good.

Burst17:I'm on hiatus dude, my laptop broke it doesn't turn on, and i can't write on my phone too many write mistakes, in a couple of months i will buy another pc, I'm really sorry for the hiatus
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