Item: The Locked System
Rating: 5
Author: leradicateur

leradicateurLv66yr

2019-02-13 07:56

really nice to read, waiting for next chapters update. Don't drop it, but don't hurrytake your time to write it!! Sometimes need to be careful, you repeat some of your text

The Locked System

Burst17

4.4

108 Chs

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Well, I'm not going to give myself 5 stars because I'm medium slow writing, also English is not my native language, so I apologize for any writing error

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