Item: The Locked System
Rating: 4.4
Author: Unique_Sovereign

Unique_SovereignLv155yr

2019-02-18 02:49

Having a mix with an anime and manga system for Hayato along with an original world you came up with your story is great for the setting. Hayato has to rise above his challenges and enemies as he goes through his adventure. Whether they’re from nobility, criminal, deities, and other anime or manga characters.

The Locked System

Burst17

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Well, I'm not going to give myself 5 stars because I'm medium slow writing, also English is not my native language, so I apologize for any writing error

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