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2023-09-17 11:36

@akikan40, please refrain from creating stories that consist solely of copied main characters. All your novels seem to feature protagonists with identical personalities, revolving around a God complex and infidelity towards female characters. I can appreciate your desire to craft a harem narrative, but consider making the protagonist more relatable and ensuring the storyline possesses a sense of common sense.

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Talking about infidelity, I feel that, it part of the author fetish. I read most of his story, and even though in the end, it all end up as harem, but the author always make the girl have expectation of it not being a harem, but just pure 1-1 relationship. Then have another girl seduce the mc and one after another push themselves toward the mc.

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Veasna_TDM:Talking about infidelity, I feel that, it part of the author fetish. I read most of his story, and even though in the end, it all end up as harem, but the author always make the girl have expectation of it not being a harem, but just pure 1-1 relationship. Then have another girl seduce the mc and one after another push themselves toward the mc.
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