I'm shocked that it has such a high score, it's frankly bad fanfic, one of the worst I've read, at first I wanted to give 3 stars, because the frequency of updates, but I think that this story is not worthy of such a high rating, so 1
Liked by 73 people
LIKEXd, está historia es mejor que algunas apartes , otra cosa es que solo digas que es malo , primero da un construcción crítica y si tus puntos son correctos , te apoyaría , pero solo pareces un hater más de tantas historias que he leído y sin olvidar que es uno de los autores que actualizan todos los días , , en comparación con los demás que solo piden piedras para que sigan sacando capítulos xd.
ok I will give a critique, I come from the future (from this comment), and I have to tell you that the narrative coherence went on sabbatical, riser in many chapters mentions knowledge that he would only know if he watched the 4 seasons of the anime, how to meet roswise or Gasper, in addition to knowing who Akeno's father is, but in the last chapter he tells us that he only saw season one of the anime and does not remember it, he came and did not see the Excalibur arc
jeanpierregerardo:Xd, está historia es mejor que algunas apartes , otra cosa es que solo digas que es malo , primero da un construcción crítica y si tus puntos son correctos , te apoyaría , pero solo pareces un hater más de tantas historias que he leído y sin olvidar que es uno de los autores que actualizan todos los días , , en comparación con los demás que solo piden piedras para que sigan sacando capítulos xd.
and I am from another future let me tell you author butchered the kokabeil fight( like, read the comments of that chapters ,most of the readers were going crazy telling how disappointing that was but author just ignored everything )
YAIRGVI:ok I will give a critique, I come from the future (from this comment), and I have to tell you that the narrative coherence went on sabbatical, riser in many chapters mentions knowledge that he would only know if he watched the 4 seasons of the anime, how to meet roswise or Gasper, in addition to knowing who Akeno's father is, but in the last chapter he tells us that he only saw season one of the anime and does not remember it, he came and did not see the Excalibur arc