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Logtagor
LogtagorLv11yr
2023-08-20 07:07

I'm shocked that it has such a high score, it's frankly bad fanfic, one of the worst I've read, at first I wanted to give 3 stars, because the frequency of updates, but I think that this story is not worthy of such a high rating, so 1

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Efthee
EftheeLv14

it's just some mindless people being crazy voting for this fic

j0k3r
j0k3rLv2

It's bcuz a DxD Fanfic that's why many voting it I think

Efthee:it's just some mindless people being crazy voting for this fic
anime_rumahan
anime_rumahanLv1

heii this bestt story you now

jeanpierregerardo
jeanpierregerardoLv5

Xd, está historia es mejor que algunas apartes , otra cosa es que solo digas que es malo , primero da un construcción crítica y si tus puntos son correctos , te apoyaría , pero solo pareces un hater más de tantas historias que he leído y sin olvidar que es uno de los autores que actualizan todos los días , , en comparación con los demás que solo piden piedras para que sigan sacando capítulos xd.

Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

Ok xianxian reader.

YAIRGVI
YAIRGVILv1

ok I will give a critique, I come from the future (from this comment), and I have to tell you that the narrative coherence went on sabbatical, riser in many chapters mentions knowledge that he would only know if he watched the 4 seasons of the anime, how to meet roswise or Gasper, in addition to knowing who Akeno's father is, but in the last chapter he tells us that he only saw season one of the anime and does not remember it, he came and did not see the Excalibur arc

jeanpierregerardo:Xd, está historia es mejor que algunas apartes , otra cosa es que solo digas que es malo , primero da un construcción crítica y si tus puntos son correctos , te apoyaría , pero solo pareces un hater más de tantas historias que he leído y sin olvidar que es uno de los autores que actualizan todos los días , , en comparación con los demás que solo piden piedras para que sigan sacando capítulos xd.
cereal_fisher_1194
cereal_fisher_1194Lv4

and I am from another future let me tell you author butchered the kokabeil fight( like, read the comments of that chapters ,most of the readers were going crazy telling how disappointing that was but author just ignored everything )

YAIRGVI:ok I will give a critique, I come from the future (from this comment), and I have to tell you that the narrative coherence went on sabbatical, riser in many chapters mentions knowledge that he would only know if he watched the 4 seasons of the anime, how to meet roswise or Gasper, in addition to knowing who Akeno's father is, but in the last chapter he tells us that he only saw season one of the anime and does not remember it, he came and did not see the Excalibur arc
Gman2123
Gman2123Lv14

cereal_fisher_1194:and I am from another future let me tell you author butchered the kokabeil fight( like, read the comments of that chapters ,most of the readers were going crazy telling how disappointing that was but author just ignored everything )
_Hori_
_Hori_Lv4

it's because the author is akikan, so they already knew and expect what kind of fanfic akikan will write (majority of the reader is old akikan reader)

Efthee:it's just some mindless people being crazy voting for this fic
AlphaZwei
AlphaZweiLv5

Can't deny that. To be fair, I come most of the time hoping for another masterpiece like siscon.

_Hori_:it's because the author is akikan, so they already knew and expect what kind of fanfic akikan will write (majority of the reader is old akikan reader)
SaintRadience25000
SaintRadience25000Lv12

I agree, of course there are plenty of people like this author who are into terrible writing like this.

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