Asta_4626

disappointed

I really enjoy this novel, but the issue I have is with the author. He writes great stories, but he always stops halfway. For example, Fodzilla: The Sky King and True Angel (Overlord/DxD) were both amazing, yet he just dropped them and moved on to new fanfics. I don’t understand why he doesn’t set up a Patreon and actually get paid for his work. He could write 100 advance chapters, release 2–3 per week, and earn real money while keeping readers invested. It just feels like wasted potential.

The story has a major flaw: if the MC can’t gain any real‑world power and everything stays inside VR, then what’s the point of calling him a “god‑like game developer”? If he’s just stealing games from his original world, the system isn’t rewarding creativity or effort. He gets points from games he didn’t make, and the system gives him new games for free, so he basically does nothing. There’s no real growth, no real stakes, and no payoff outside VR. It makes the whole setup feel pointless.

There’s already a fanfic that does this concept way better — Multiverse Share: 36 Worlds at the Same Time (completed). The translation there is cleaner and the whole story is finished. This one, by comparison, is poorly translated and honestly painful to read without losing brain cells.

Dropped fanfic huh a whole month with 0 chapters 000000000000000000000

The idea behind this fic is solid, but there’s one major problem: the power‑scaling and world logic fall apart immediately. If a foreign alien energy signature appears in Marvel, the Sorcerer Supreme would detect it instantly and deal with the threat long before the MC has time to do anything. On top of that, the Great Mage Returns manhwa is strong, sure—but it’s nowhere near the level of Marvel’s top tiers. Marvel has gods, cosmic entities, and planet‑busters everywhere. Meanwhile, in the manhwa it took thousands of years just to conquer a single planet. It feels like you love the original novel so much that you’re nerfing the entire Marvel universe just to make your idea work. That doesn’t make the crossover believable. What would’ve made more sense is having the MC reincarnate into Marvel with that power but still needing to train, adapt, and grow instead of becoming instantly overpowered.

He has a servant now, sure, but he’s still weak, annoying, and completely lovesick over Mash. He hasn’t learned any magic, doesn’t improve, and never learns from his mistakes. He keeps running straight into danger even though he’s weak as hell. It’s frustrating to read. I'm on Chapter 8 so Far.

He has a servant now, sure, but he’s still weak, annoying, and completely lovesick over Mash. He hasn’t learned any magic, doesn’t improve, and never learns from his mistakes. He keeps running straight into danger even though he’s weak as hell. It’s frustrating to read.

WTF is wrong with this MC

He gets kidnapped, forced into this nonsense, ripped away from his family and university, yet he never stops to question anything. He doesn’t wonder what’s happening, doesn’t push back, doesn’t even try to understand the situation. He just goes along with it like some passive NPC. No power, no agency, just streaming. Sigh… disappointing. I’ll keep reading to see if it gets better.