I like this. I've no reason why I just do. No onto the many, many, many negatives. 1) I don't like harem 2) So the main character is Yun Che from Against the Gods, no big deal. What is a big plot hole is the fact that our MC supposedly has the same exact story and yet ours is super edgy and lacks "female contact" while in ATG, Yun Che is the fucking harem king, this makes no sense to me. 3) I'm not against using the MC of different novels but in this case, the author really ****ed up. The MC we have here has grown up without any type of parental love, any sort of love really and yet fucking Yun Che if I remember correctly has like 4 parents, a **** ton of grandparents, and like a different goddess from every single region who all likes him. TBH the author probs chose ATG because of the power system/cool names. 4)Going to different anime worlds? Cool. But the author doesn't introduce anything new to the worlds he goes to. It's basically just wish fulfillment, the author literally inserts himself into the MC. Let me give an example, the first anime world he goes into is ifinite stratos, and the MC basically steals the harem members from the MC of that anime world and yet is like 1000 times stronger/capable/better in every way. What's more, this doesn't even fit into the MC's character traits. "Hmmm? Some girl I just destroyed in a match yesterday is asking me to be my girlfriend, right in front of my current girlfriend? AND not to mention the fact that my current way just gave away permission just like that since they both drew in a match against each other? Sure why not." 5) Now some may say that it's hard to flesh out an anime world without breaking a few concepts but in this case the author doesn't even need to do much for example I can literally **** out ideas for Infinite stratos, make like a whole arc about how the new tech machine armor thingy can be used in war and the impact it has on current warfare as well as the patriarchy (prodominantly male rule) of society. Would love to see some try to do some research on why the MC is able to use the machines to be able to reverse the changes / get a bigger army with more reserves. 7) Just bad English, some words misspelled, some others just used wrong, some in the wrong tense. Okay that's probably it. Maybe. Either way I know nothing is going to change, the author wants to write what he wants to write and there's nothing wrong with that, I just want to let some of y'all know what you're getting into. 10/10 would review again
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Answer for your review: 1) the harem is not in every world, there is already a world already finished without harem. 2) they may be similar, but at least he had some love in all 3 his lives, while mc here was alone, and this change much in the psycological looks or my mc. 3) this is my mc, if you think that about him then I don't care, everyone has a personal one. 4) no comment 5) I just like that type of scenario, I don't like too much changes except in a few situations 6) you missed the n.6 7) I am not english myself and I don't have an editor This is my answer to your review, but I would apprecciate if you read the end of the first volume, or you could start with the second, nothing much changed so it isnt a problem since he didn't take almost nothing except for knowledge from the first world
The main character is NOT Yun Che
The MC takes heavy inspiration from Yun Che though and acts literally the same way
The first world was harem. The second world wasn't. However, this doesn't change the fact that the novel is a harem one. Lemme give an example. If a MC of a story has like 3 people he's married to it's a harem. When he accends into another realm and only takes one person there as his wife, does that mean it's no longer a harem? Anyways what's with the girls coming back to him as soon as he is done with the second world? I liked the fact that the MC cries when he looks back at those memories. With them coming back, what was the point of God taking them away so that he doesn't feel the pain? Why didn't God just do the same after the first world?
I was sad too about he leaving the girls... Believe it or not, I am the first who cried in the stories, not mc, not you guys, but me.
Harém is life 😍😍
You forgot to include the story's lack capital letters in point (7)
I agreed
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good review, thank you for sparing me this, as I would have prob given a nasty review or something in anger. Now I wont have to that, I can just find something else to read, again; thank you.
