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Kazutoxin
KazutoxinLv156yr
2018-11-18 22:50

Creator you have to put h-scene in this novel Because therme a Harem and de don't want to See something like Highschool DxD the Anime and manga

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General_Paragon
General_ParagonAuthor

Its ok, mc will be laid but no H scenes about it, i suck at that category...

Sky_Void_of_Aeons
Sky_Void_of_AeonsLv15

This is a harem yet rated general audiences?!?! Change it immediately!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

General_Paragon:Its ok, mc will be laid but no H scenes about it, i suck at that category...
Xaact
XaactLv14

No.. if i want **** i wont go to webnovel Im here to read novel. If you want **** go download some **** from rarbg or piratebay If you want erotic story go to literotica not here If you want hentai go to exhentai If you want to fap use rosy five finger If you want to f u c k what the hell are you doing here?

PoeticPenguin
PoeticPenguinLv5

Harem doesn’t mean it’s not suited for the general audience. It’s basically lots of girls to 1 boy or lots of boys to 1 girl. Same as 1 boy and 1 girl except there may be some different circumstances (like the 1 boy/girl doesn’t romantically like the girls/boys.) If a boy and a girl can be romantically involved and be considered “general audience”, harems can be considered as so as well.

Sky_Void_of_Aeons:This is a harem yet rated general audiences?!?! Change it immediately!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PoeticPenguin
PoeticPenguinLv5

Only if there’s explicit material, would they be considered otherwise.

PoeticPenguin:Harem doesn’t mean it’s not suited for the general audience. It’s basically lots of girls to 1 boy or lots of boys to 1 girl. Same as 1 boy and 1 girl except there may be some different circumstances (like the 1 boy/girl doesn’t romantically like the girls/boys.) If a boy and a girl can be romantically involved and be considered “general audience”, harems can be considered as so as well.
Sky_Void_of_Aeons
Sky_Void_of_AeonsLv15

No, as far as I'm concerned, any cr*p like that that twists kids into thinking they want something like that should be rated r, and if not appropriately rated, IMMEDIATELY taken down.

PoeticPenguin:Harem doesn’t mean it’s not suited for the general audience. It’s basically lots of girls to 1 boy or lots of boys to 1 girl. Same as 1 boy and 1 girl except there may be some different circumstances (like the 1 boy/girl doesn’t romantically like the girls/boys.) If a boy and a girl can be romantically involved and be considered “general audience”, harems can be considered as so as well.
PoeticPenguin
PoeticPenguinLv5

Could you give your reasonings of why it should be rated r? After all, sexuality nowadays are numerous and variable, so polygamic relationships aren’t seen as “rated r”

Sky_Void_of_Aeons:No, as far as I'm concerned, any cr*p like that that twists kids into thinking they want something like that should be rated r, and if not appropriately rated, IMMEDIATELY taken down.
Sky_Void_of_Aeons
Sky_Void_of_AeonsLv15

Polygamy is illegal for a reason. Sexuality is not. Entirely different subjects.

PoeticPenguin:Could you give your reasonings of why it should be rated r? After all, sexuality nowadays are numerous and variable, so polygamic relationships aren’t seen as “rated r”
PoeticPenguin
PoeticPenguinLv5

Then this is not a matter of rating, just a matter of conservation lol depending on ur upbringing and environment really. It may be illegal in your country, but it isn’t in some others.

Sky_Void_of_Aeons:Polygamy is illegal for a reason. Sexuality is not. Entirely different subjects.
Sky_Void_of_Aeons
Sky_Void_of_AeonsLv15

Ummm, yes. It is. It is morally wrong and gives young impressionable children twisted thoughts, which is the reason why there is a rating in the first place!!!!!!

PoeticPenguin:Then this is not a matter of rating, just a matter of conservation lol depending on ur upbringing and environment really. It may be illegal in your country, but it isn’t in some others.
General_Paragon
General_ParagonAuthor

Then there's a 12 years old kid watching ****hub

Sky_Void_of_Aeons:Ummm, yes. It is. It is morally wrong and gives young impressionable children twisted thoughts, which is the reason why there is a rating in the first place!!!!!!
rolas
rolasLv14

thats why i want pokemon to be rated r. otherwise kids think they can just run around and let their pets fight battles.

Sky_Void_of_Aeons:No, as far as I'm concerned, any cr*p like that that twists kids into thinking they want something like that should be rated r, and if not appropriately rated, IMMEDIATELY taken down.
rolas
rolasLv14

which would be morally wrong

rolas:thats why i want pokemon to be rated r. otherwise kids think they can just run around and let their pets fight battles.
Sky_Void_of_Aeons
Sky_Void_of_AeonsLv15

That makes absolutely no sense at all. That has absolutely nothing to do with anything I was talking about. I think you need to read it again. And perhaps get a brain whilst you're at it.

rolas:thats why i want pokemon to be rated r. otherwise kids think they can just run around and let their pets fight battles.
PoeticPenguin
PoeticPenguinLv5

Rolas was just saying how absurd your comment by using an example for a more visual comparison. Maybe try viewing the rating in the shoes of a person who was born in a country where polygamy is not illegal and is open-minded in general. See if that helps. The rating system for webnovel is not based on what you were brought up with, so I don’t think it’s morally right for you to dictate what’s general and what’s not. However, I’m not saying that you should be restricted from speaking out your opinion and so am I because it’s a free country(for me at least; I don’t want to assume anything and cause you to be offended/triggered) right?

Sky_Void_of_Aeons:That makes absolutely no sense at all. That has absolutely nothing to do with anything I was talking about. I think you need to read it again. And perhaps get a brain whilst you're at it.
PoeticPenguin
PoeticPenguinLv5

Also, though I have been using polygamy this whole time, it might as well be polyamory as long as the MC doesn’t get married to all of them. Sometimes the MC chooses 1 girl in the end too, so forgive me for my choice of words.

Sky_Void_of_Aeons:That makes absolutely no sense at all. That has absolutely nothing to do with anything I was talking about. I think you need to read it again. And perhaps get a brain whilst you're at it.
Sky_Void_of_Aeons
Sky_Void_of_AeonsLv15

The company servers, as far as I'm aware, are in America. And it is all in ENGLISH. Which makes it illegal. As defined by the US laws.

PoeticPenguin:Rolas was just saying how absurd your comment by using an example for a more visual comparison. Maybe try viewing the rating in the shoes of a person who was born in a country where polygamy is not illegal and is open-minded in general. See if that helps. The rating system for webnovel is not based on what you were brought up with, so I don’t think it’s morally right for you to dictate what’s general and what’s not. However, I’m not saying that you should be restricted from speaking out your opinion and so am I because it’s a free country(for me at least; I don’t want to assume anything and cause you to be offended/triggered) right?
PoeticPenguin
PoeticPenguinLv5

I do not know how you came to this conclusion. Many other countries speak English and a lot of countries teach their students English from elementary or middle school. It is the most “known” language in the world and so, English translations are more profitable(because more people know English) than a Spanish/Japanese/french translation. They are expanding to America because that is an English-speaking country, but their main “base” is not in America. To be completely honest, I do not know why you are considering this factor when this is a story, a fiction, is not taking place in America(as far as I know) and might as well be in another world all together. Also consider the fact that the MC has NOT married 2+ girls. In fact, I do not believe he is married at all as of now. Right now, it’s on the point of sexuality so it wouldn’t be illegal anyways. Maybe you should read the story, I don’t know.

Sky_Void_of_Aeons:The company servers, as far as I'm aware, are in America. And it is all in ENGLISH. Which makes it illegal. As defined by the US laws.
Jinon786
Jinon786Lv2

Is there no ***** secne?

Sky_Void_of_Aeons:This is a harem yet rated general audiences?!?! Change it immediately!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
CIiff_Hanger
CIiff_HangerLv11

I appreciate that. Not every novel has to have sex. I would much rather have 1 chapter of detailed emotional development rather than 10 chapters of a male indulging in sexual pleasures with females who rarely make an appearance and are only trophies who only exist for sexual satisfaction.

General_Paragon:Its ok, mc will be laid but no H scenes about it, i suck at that category...
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SleepDeprivation
SleepDeprivationLv6

I like this. I've no reason why I just do. No onto the many, many, many negatives. 1) I don't like harem 2) So the main character is Yun Che from Against the Gods, no big deal. What is a big plot hole is the fact that our MC supposedly has the same exact story and yet ours is super edgy and lacks "female contact" while in ATG, Yun Che is the fucking harem king, this makes no sense to me. 3) I'm not against using the MC of different novels but in this case, the author really ****ed up. The MC we have here has grown up without any type of parental love, any sort of love really and yet fucking Yun Che if I remember correctly has like 4 parents, a **** ton of grandparents, and like a different goddess from every single region who all likes him. TBH the author probs chose ATG because of the power system/cool names. 4)Going to different anime worlds? Cool. But the author doesn't introduce anything new to the worlds he goes to. It's basically just wish fulfillment, the author literally inserts himself into the MC. Let me give an example, the first anime world he goes into is ifinite stratos, and the MC basically steals the harem members from the MC of that anime world and yet is like 1000 times stronger/capable/better in every way. What's more, this doesn't even fit into the MC's character traits. "Hmmm? Some girl I just destroyed in a match yesterday is asking me to be my girlfriend, right in front of my current girlfriend? AND not to mention the fact that my current way just gave away permission just like that since they both drew in a match against each other? Sure why not." 5) Now some may say that it's hard to flesh out an anime world without breaking a few concepts but in this case the author doesn't even need to do much for example I can literally **** out ideas for Infinite stratos, make like a whole arc about how the new tech machine armor thingy can be used in war and the impact it has on current warfare as well as the patriarchy (prodominantly male rule) of society. Would love to see some try to do some research on why the MC is able to use the machines to be able to reverse the changes / get a bigger army with more reserves. 7) Just bad English, some words misspelled, some others just used wrong, some in the wrong tense. Okay that's probably it. Maybe. Either way I know nothing is going to change, the author wants to write what he wants to write and there's nothing wrong with that, I just want to let some of y'all know what you're getting into. 10/10 would review again

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