Item: Trap Online
Rating: 3

wit_dafaceLv43yr

2021-05-21 14:54

Giving an average grade since the plot and character's feel like a replica of every genderbend fantasy novel. The meek fem mc and the aggressive love interests... I'm open to different smut novels but I've never been fond of beta mcs.

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