Item: Trap Online
Rating: 4.6
Author: dFuZeJoker

dFuZeJokerLv34yr

2020-06-10 14:19

The story has a pretty good start. I can't say much as I only made a review after the first chapter. I just thought giving a high rating would motivate the author and gather more readers. It seems like it can turn into an interesting story so I say the author should continue with it

Trap Online

Madjic

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Liked by 8 people

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MadjicAuthor

Thanks, I am working on it. I brought this chapter out as a start so people know it exists and to work hard on it. I'm working on the mechanics of the system. The damage math has been rough but I like the vote of confidence. Thank you.

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