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Grenat
GrenatLv104yr
2021-02-09 04:01

writing quality : 3 star. The rest got 4 to 5 stars. I hope for a better writing quality. Good story, continue your good job author ![img=recommend]

Trap Online

Madjic
4.5
250 Chs

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Jaky124
Jaky124Lv4

I realy like this novel, and I fell like this should have more recognition, can't wait for him to accept himself even irl 😁 Please author don't drop this in the future!

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JewelsGatherer
JewelsGathererLv1

Awesome novel, recommended to read it, but you might end up popping a boner so be mindful of your surroundings 😉😂, the first chapters is just Rick getting over his depression and finding his kink... or more like it found him jajaja anyways i wont do spoilers, my favourite character is Iona by the way, shes just too cute 😌👌🏻

4yr
dFuZeJoker
dFuZeJokerLv3

The story has a pretty good start. I can't say much as I only made a review after the first chapter. I just thought giving a high rating would motivate the author and gather more readers. It seems like it can turn into an interesting story so I say the author should continue with it

4yr
Cataclysm_DDA
Cataclysm_DDALv13

Pretty good so far, but there is only three chapters at the time of this review. Sooooooooooo, it might get a little outdated. Could get better could get worse, only time can tell.

4yr
Jose_Quintero_9445
Jose_Quintero_9445Lv2

Es muy bien la historia el desarrollo del personaje principal rick con su aceptación de su deseo sexual, sus personajes secundario como Verónica están bien expresados sus motivaciones en la trama y por último pero no menos importante la escenas de ***o están increíbles más de 1 ves lo relei Inglés It is very well the story the development of the main character rick with his acceptance of his sexual desire, his secondary characters like Veronica are well expressed their motivations in the plot and last but not least the *** scenes are amazing more than 1 see it reread

4yr
NirvanaPenguin
NirvanaPenguinLv4

i would be an ork in this game and just enjoy it to the fullest jajaja, or an incubus sounds nice too 🤔, the book it really nice and has potential, cant wait for more. Iona best waifu.

4yr
sweet_fruit
sweet_fruitLv13

Love this novel, amazing story and writing quality, character development is awsome, all that needs work is the update frequency.

4yr
JamesBrown
JamesBrownLv14

Very good. It is engaging, heartwarming, and hot. I have more than once found my self too absorbed in the story to even __________. That’s not to say that I haven’t multiple times.

3yr
Roger_Burgess
Roger_BurgessLv14

keep up the good work.......................................................................................................................

4yr
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